Push

Nov 26, 2012 02:53

Fandom: EXO
Title: Push (1/2)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Baekyeol
Summary: Baekhyun was in every form of the word - a tease. And also good at math.
Warning(s): dominate!Baekhyun and just pure porn without plot
Word Count: 3,012

“You know if you helped me, this would go by a lot faster,” Chanyeol mumbled. )

pairing: baekyeol, length: one-shot, genre: romance, rating: nc-17, fanfic!, genre: smut

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zeraiya November 26 2012, 10:18:37 UTC
SORRY, I KIND OF HAD TO COLLECT MY WITS BEFORE I COULD COMMENT PROPERLY. THE QUESTION NOW IS DO I KEEP YELLING AT YOU OR DO I REMOVE THE CAPS.

I'll try and stop yelling at you - yeah, this isn't soft porn, but then again I don't think you were properly listening to my explanation. "Soft porn" is when he don't have explicit sexual material - it can also mean when you don't have explicit sexual acts. And uh, honey, blowjobs and fucking fingering another person is an explicit sexual act SO YEAH, THIS ISN'T SOFT PORN. You usually know when you read soft porn to be honest. For example, I haven't ever written soft porn (well I have, but not in the K-pop fandom, so). SO YEAH, STOP POUTING AND W/E BECAUSE THIS IS NOT SOFT PORN.

AND OH LOOK I'M YELLING AT YOU AGAIN, WELL TOUGH BECAUSE I'M GOING TO STAY YELLING BECAUSE HOLY FUCK CHANYEOL BEING A NEEDY WHINY LITTLE BITCH IS KIND OF ONE OF MY KINKS AND IT'S JUST SO FILTHY AND GORGEOUS AND WONDERFUL AND ALSO LETS FACE IT BAEKHYUN CERTAINLY HAS THE HANDS AND FINGERS FOR MAKING CHANYEOL A DELIRIOUS MESS SO I GREATLY APPROVE OF THAT WHOLE THING AND ESPECIALLY HOW CHANYEOL FUCKED HIMSELF ON BAEKHYUN'S FINGERS, LORD IN HEAVEN HELP ME BECAUSE THAT IS LIKE LEGITIMATELY TOO MUCH FOR MY SLEEP DEPRIVED BRAIN TO HANDLE RIGHT NOW.

I SINCERELY HOPE THAT IN THE SECOND PART - WHICH I AM WAITING FOR LIKE A HAWK JUST SO YOU KNOW - YOU KEEP THIS FEISTY, TEASING, ASSHOLE STREAK IN BAEKHYUN BECAUSE GOD IS IT HOT, AND YOU KNOW IT'S HOT. YOU KNOW IT IS KIT, ADMIT IT. YOU LIKE WRITING DOMINANT!BAEK, IT'S FUN RIGHT? GOD I JUST WANT TO ROLL MYSELF UP AND BLANKETS AND MAKE WALRUS NOISES BECAUSE THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD.

FOR THE RECORD - I FUCKING TOLD YOU YOUR PORN WOULD BE GOOD AND HAH I FUCKING CALLED IT, YOU WRITE THE BEST PORN. IT'S OBSCENE AND FILTHY AND JUST THE TINIEST BIT VULGAR (not in any way that it's offputting or unpleasant) AND THAT'S WHAT MAKES IT SO FREAKING GOOD. IT'S SO HOT THAT I AM GOING TO JUMP INTO THE SUN NOW TO COOL OFF.

FUUUUUUUCK AT CHANYEOL WANTING TO BE FILLED THOUGH, JUST FUCK MY ACTUAL LIFE AT THAT, I AM SO DONE.

“You’re worried about your parents, but you are already half hard.” Baekhyun smirked. “Isn’t that a little kinky?” Chanyeol flushed an even deeper shade of red and stuttered an excuse that made no coherent sense. It was Baekhyun. Chanyeol always felt desire gathering in the pit of his stomach when the other was close to him, let alone making it obvious that he was planning on touching him. PORPOISE NOISES I SWEAR TO GOD

OKAY BYE I LOVE YOU AND YES I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU AND YES I LOVE YOU AND WHERE IS THE OTHER PART???????

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 22:24:31 UTC
I READ THIS WHOLE WITH A SCREAMING VOICE IN MY HEAD. LOL.

I swear you used the words "soft porn" and "foreplay" synonymous with each other. Haha. But okay, I'll consider it as another thing that just flew over my head or in one ear and out the other. I should try to listen more carefully in the future... I feel like that could help a lot of things. So then do you consider soft porn things like "and they touched and kissed, making love long into the night." Because I just consider those FUCKING TEASES DESCRIBE IT IN VULGAR WORDS PLZ. AND I WASN'T POUTING I WAS BUT LIES

SEE THIS IS WHEN THE SCREAMING IN MY HEAD STARTED. AND EVEN NOW AS I WRITE THIS THE VOICE IS SCREAMING. WITCHCRAFT. Chanyeol just got trapped lol. And I don't even know how that happened all the sudden he was just FUCKING HIMSELF ON BAEKHYUN'S FINGERS AND I CAN'T WRITE DIRTY TALK AND /DEAD/

SEE YOU ARE HAPPY I SEPARATED THIS STORY INTO TWO PARTS RIGHT? THANK YOU FOR THREATENING ME WITH NEVER WRITING AGAIN TO GET WHAT YOU WANT. THAT WAS A LOW BLOW AND I JUST REMEMBERED AND NOW I'M HUFFING AND PUFFING AND YOU WAIT UNTIL THE SECOND PART I'M GOING TO JUST EXPLODE EVERYTHING ALL OVER THE PLACE. AND YOU ARE A CORRUPTING PERSON. I CAN'T NOT HAVE BAEKHYUN HAVING CONTROL BECAUSE THAT IS ALL I SEE - AND YOU TURNED ME TO THE DARK SIDE OF HOT TOP!BAEKHYUN SEX. RAWWWWRRRR

THIS THING WAS SO VULGAR AND I FEEL SO OUT OF SHAPE WITH ACTUAL PORN CAUSE ALL MY DRABBLES HAVE BEEN FUCKING TEASES AND I JUST SPAZZED OVER MYSELF WHILE WRITING THIS THING CAUSE EVERYTHING WAS SO DIRTY AND IT FELT AWKWARD BUT SORTA GOOD AND I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK. And I think you are going to explode if you jump into the sun, but wait that is what I threatened you with before so YES JUMP INTO THE SUN AND COOL OFF SO I CAN EXPLODE YOU WITH PART 2.

I felt like he wanted it. I mean its Baekhyunnie and his fingers and HE JUST NEEDED THEM OKAY

Hahaha, oh the porpoise! :D Our noises of aquatic animals has begun.

I love you too~ And actually I got really sick sometime in the middle of the night curse you cold. So now part 2 is up for grabs on when it will be posted. I'm probably going to be passed out as early as 6 tonight. /le sigh/ BUT WHEN I POST THE SECOND PART IT WILL BE AS BEAUTIFUL AS FILTHY PORN CAN BE.

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