Does it have the kick that I'm looking for?  Let me know if it does or if it just falls flat.

"Peanuts to Me"

In bed on those freezing cold nights

I felt the sting of winter's bite

And instead of heat, I slept in my thickest sweater

Because it would get worse, before it got better

That isn't just peanuts to me.

Four hundred and forty and four days ( Read more... )

Don't know if I spelled it correctly.  I think I need to write much more often in Farsi...so I downloaded the patch.  Can you guys read the title to this post?  Or is it just a bunch of squares or other indecipherable characters?

I just finished up writing the first draft of my first paper.  It's analyzing the language used in Tim O'Brien's "The Things They Carried."  I had Sheerin proof read it and she quickly pointed out that two words that I used don't (and I'm paraphrasing (she actually put it in a nice way)) not academic sounding enough.  Now I know that the words " ( Read more... )

So I am trying to write what I guess would be called an album.  That is the end goal so far.  I have one song in which I've almost completed the first draft.  I've done revisions on the various parts of the song, but it hasn't been complete yet.  Now this is exactly where you separate the people who sink and the people who swim.  Since conception ( Read more... )

Well, here it is.  I have to continue writing in my journal for it to even have a chance of bettering my writing even a little.  I have neglected it the whole weekend, but I didn't actually have a set schedule for writing in it.  I guess the first thing I should do is set a schedule for journal writing, probably every third day, and then set a ( Read more... )

I'm going to level with both myself and all of you.   I'm not a writer.  I have always had trouble writing anything.  I fare miserably in any classes that involve writing and I can not creatively express myself sufficiently through writing.  I am currently back in school and will have to write regardless of whether I like to or not, or if it is ( Read more... )

I'm curious to know who still uses livejournal.  Please respond is you do.

Had my show today. Nobody I know came. Just like every other show except one. We rocked, and you missed it. Too bad for you.

This is a VERY important lesson. Do not forget this, this may be the most important thing to contemplate for the next year. Rock beats paper. I love you Sheerin, and I believe in other forces than science. I believe in energy. Rock beats paper, Rock beats scissors, Rock beats paper Rock beats scissors, Rock beats paper, Rock beats scissors. ( Read more... )

Has anyone saw the movie Tombstone? I know I haven't, but Peter Smith has. I am drunk, so I'm not going to use the backspace button starting from..... now. In fact 'm not even looking at the scren. I am in the green mountain state. oops I forgot to capitalize. I am with the buddy's thå† I have. I have Ufos's in my system and not the ones ( Read more... )