GX/5D's RP HMD meme

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How's My Driving?

• Comment with the name of the character(s) you want critiqued. If you want them all, list them all- It's hard enough for players to keep up with their own casts! If you'd rather have yourself critiqued instead, post your forum username. For anything else you'd like critiqued (I.E.: decks, created cards, etcetera), post that. If

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[warriormonger]

why the hell not.

Zaniah Melancholy, Eon Flunky, Edward Finklestein, Lila Daughtily.

[slashlives]

Do something with Ed.

That is all.

[slashlives]

So, here I am for the "more thought out critique." Can you handle it?!

First off, let me say that your RPing for GX has really improved. You're still going off of Rule of Cool, but not as ridiculously as you had been before. Your characters are a lot more consistent and understandable as a result... Even Zaniah's improved, and she used to be your deepest cast member! Keep up the good work.

My previous assessment of "Ed needs to do more!" still stands. Zaniah, Eon, and Lila are all at perfectly fine points in the RP right now... Ed is still missing "something." There are lots of things you and I do for him, and you and I care about the little guy a lot, but... I'm not sure everyone else does, and that could be a problem. Part of this is probably due to the fact that "Ed is the real Spell Seal holder" didn't come about until recently. Not entirely your fault, there! But now that it's out there, he should definitely get the kind of attention Zaniah got. The skip could be a good opportunity for that, so think about it fully!

[warriormonger]

GLAH SPOILER SPOILER PLEASE BLACK IT OUT OR SOMETHING!

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SORRY, BRAH, NO CAN DO ONCE YOU COMMENT!

[warriormonger]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

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[warriormonger]