The six word challenge.

[spikesgirl58]

The words

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[casey28]

Here's mine...

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Each grain of sand a mother,

Each wave a working sea,

that births a weathered warning,

no shelter sings for thee

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Shores splurge their musty dampness,

they hoard their shells of gold,

to spend on boat’s beginnings,

before their form does hold

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Define the roads before the ruin,

define the shipless sea,

whose name is sprawled amongst the stars,

before life came to be.

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Definite the world’s first spin,

the ocean dawns a breath,

to train its wheels on liquid tracks,

that ride away from death

[duckys_lady]

Lovely!

[casey28]

Thanks so much!♥

[nakeisha]

Superb. I know I keep saying it, but you are so talented and write these poems so well.

[casey28]

Thanks, that's so lovely to hear.♥

[spikesgirl58]

You constantly amaze me! Thanks for a lovely poem.

[casey28]

Thanks, that's so lovely to hear.♥ You're very welcome.