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Six Word Challenge
Oct 04, 2024 03:03
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casey28
October 4 2024, 17:33:07 UTC
“I’ve heard of climbing the social ladder, but never thought you’d stoop to it.”
Great line and great use of the words!
Here's mine...
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Railroad counts on her fingers,
her cargo like beads on a string,
the sing-song rattle of contents,
undertake journey’s begin.
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Step stools are ladders to somewhere,
a tunnel’s long route never wanes,
worn trains like snow cling to the alley
where flakes socialize ’till they’re rain.
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dancingpony
October 4 2024, 23:22:54 UTC
I’m amazed you could turn these words into a poem. Great job.
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casey28
October 4 2024, 23:33:02 UTC
Thanks so much!♥
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spikesgirl58
October 4 2024, 23:27:14 UTC
Brilliant as always. :DD
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casey28
October 4 2024, 23:33:51 UTC
Thanks so much!♥ :DD
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nakeisha
October 5 2024, 09:58:31 UTC
Excellent, as always. I'm stunned at how you managed to get this eclectic list of words into such a good poem. Well done.
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duckys_lady
October 5 2024, 17:46:19 UTC
Very nice!
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“I’ve heard of climbing the social ladder, but never thought you’d stoop to it.”
Great line and great use of the words!
Here's mine...
*
Railroad counts on her fingers,
her cargo like beads on a string,
the sing-song rattle of contents,
undertake journey’s begin.
*
Step stools are ladders to somewhere,
a tunnel’s long route never wanes,
worn trains like snow cling to the alley
where flakes socialize ’till they’re rain.
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Thanks so much!♥
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Brilliant as always. :DD
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Thanks so much!♥ :DD
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