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casey28 October 4 2024, 17:33:07 UTC

“I’ve heard of climbing the social ladder, but never thought you’d stoop to it.”

Great line and great use of the words!

Here's mine...

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Railroad counts on her fingers,

her cargo like beads on a string,

the sing-song rattle of contents,

undertake journey’s begin.

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Step stools are ladders to somewhere,

a tunnel’s long route never wanes,

worn trains like snow cling to the alley

where flakes socialize ’till they’re rain.

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dancingpony October 4 2024, 23:22:54 UTC
I’m amazed you could turn these words into a poem. Great job.

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casey28 October 4 2024, 23:33:02 UTC

Thanks so much!♥

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spikesgirl58 October 4 2024, 23:27:14 UTC

Brilliant as always. :DD

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casey28 October 4 2024, 23:33:51 UTC

Thanks so much!♥ :DD

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nakeisha October 5 2024, 09:58:31 UTC
Excellent, as always. I'm stunned at how you managed to get this eclectic list of words into such a good poem. Well done.

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duckys_lady October 5 2024, 17:46:19 UTC
Very nice!

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