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crystaldrake in spaz_fics

Theater (Original)

Oct 05, 2009 16:29

Title: Theater
Characters: unnamed girl
Rating: G
Word Count: 141
Notes: Written for
brigits_flame week 1 prompt: instep

It was strange. She had always envisioned herself being the star. She had never expected work behind the scenes on a production. It had always been her dream, ever since she was a child, to have the female lead role in Swan Lake. But ( Read more... )

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crystaldrake October 8 2009, 13:58:15 UTC

Thanks.

quill_quirks October 12 2009, 12:05:57 UTC

I like how the piece is titled 'Theater' and the character is unnamed. In this one simple piece you succinctly write the universal tale of hoards of folks who have dreamed of stardom and had to settle for backstage instead. Please take a bow. *Lights, Applause, Flowers*

crystaldrake October 13 2009, 13:17:40 UTC

Thanks for the feedback.

jlly_coppercorn October 15 2009, 03:33:55 UTC

I like the way you perpetuated her love for the stage by drawing her to stage work when she couldn't dance anymore.
That would be a tough blow to someone who has their heart set on being under the lights.

crystaldrake October 19 2009, 03:20:18 UTC

Thank you for the feedback.