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[spikedlove]

Title- Feathers

Sparrington

Disclaimer- This is Disney’s sandbox, I just play here

Summary-“No sparrow should ever be caged”

Warnings- Abuse, sex, slash, language, lots of rum being consumed by a certain pirate captain.

Chapter- Prologue/?

“James come away from there” his father said sternly as his small son began to feed some of the small

Comments

[vintage__cherry]

yey I stole the comment box virginity go me!
This story rules I really hope you make a series of it, poor James!

[suteneko__chan]

I like. There are a lot of punctuation issues in this, however - lack of commas in dialogue, and whatnot. (i.e. “James come away from there” his father said sternly... should be, “James, come away from there,” his father said sternly... If you fix that, then everything is muchly good.

[spikedlove]

commas hate me. I know that's not an excuse but I am working on it I promise. Glad you like