Comments | sp23: Fic: Scent of a Man (John/Rodney, NC-17)

sp23

Fic: Scent of a Man (John/Rodney, NC-17)

Jul 26, 2006 15:45

Title: Scent of a Man ( Read more... )

Comments 30

spikedluv July 26 2006, 20:11:22 UTC

That was lovely, and bittersweet. How sad that John must leave in the middle of the night. I like the idea of him carrying Rodney's scent with him, though. *g*

sp23 July 26 2006, 20:16:29 UTC

Thanks. This was kind of an introspective John piece. A look into the John that he hides from others, and even Rodney has so far only gotten a small glimpse of.

I'm glad you liked. :)

kimberlite July 26 2006, 21:27:34 UTC

John knows he should pull away, get out of bed, dress, and leave, but Rodney is sleep-warmed and tempting, and John can't resist stealing just one last kiss.

I liked how they both knew John needed to leave and yet they just couldn't stop touching. Very sensual and the image of John carrying Rodney's scent with him was guh. :)

sp23 July 26 2006, 21:32:11 UTC

Thank you! The 'scent' prompt just seemed to call for a morning-after story. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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sp23 July 26 2006, 23:10:45 UTC

Thanks. This did turn out more bittersweet than I'd originally imagined. I see John as someone who's never really been in love, and then when he is, he has to hide it.

I'm glad you liked it. :)

elayna88 July 27 2006, 01:10:59 UTC

I've enjoyed all of this series, and this is a lovely addition.

sp23 July 27 2006, 01:52:51 UTC

Thank you. This one got a little introspective, but the next is going to be pure smut. *g*

melagan July 27 2006, 01:36:55 UTC

Hot and lovely all wrapped up together. Love how reluctant John is about leaving. It makes the last line even more powerful.

sp23 July 27 2006, 01:57:05 UTC

Thank you. I kinda liked showing a side of John I don't usually explore - the lonely man who has to hide who and what he is from the rest of the world. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)