Happy post-Halloween! Have some House.

[sowell]

Title: When the house falls down (8/12)
Author: sowell 
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, sexual situations, general lack of hearts and rainbows, um....melodrama? Also, spoilers up through manga issue 418, both in fic and author's notes.
Genre: Action, adventure, friendship, romance, aaaaaaaaaaaangst
Wordcount: 1,747
Summary: When the house falls down,

Comments

[inesn_n]

OMG! YOU KILLEED NARUTO!!!!! *is in shock*
but he comes back to life rite?...rite?
PLEEEZE?
...

[sowell]

Hee. Keep reading and see!

...I can guarantee that this isn't the last you'll see of Naruto.... :)

[inesn_n]

This broke me. Utterly, completely, profoundly. I wonder if writers ever fully comprehend the power they hold. As redundant and overused as the line is, the pen indeed is mightier than the sword

[inesn_n]

PS I still don't know how to manouevre about on here and thus replied to your reply to another poster he he he...

also there should have been a comma to demonstrate in your fic there is no loophole, nothing to say Sasuke did not mean for Naruto to die or so whereas in canon there always is!

...waiting waiting waiting for an update I had to wait until I got home to review LOL

[sowell]

This broke me. Utterly, completely, profoundly.

Oh no! While it's always nice to hear that something I write is emotionally affecting, I didn't mean to break anyone... :( Okay, your comment was really nice and detailed, so I'm going to respond in kind:

While Sasuke had learnt a whole slew of jutsus and become powerful enough to overpower Orochimaru Naruto has not learnt a single new thing except expand on close range battle jutsus.

I guess...I'm okay with that, at this point. From the beginning, their dynamic has always been that Sasuke is a few steps ahead of Naruto, skill-wise. It's one of the things that fuels their rivalry and keeps them connected, I think, so it doesn't bother me toooo much. Unlike Sasuke, Naruto's real strength has always come out when he's defending someone or something he loves, and I don't think we've seen him in that sort of battle against Sasuke yet, post-time-skip.

I hope to goodness he clicks to use a clone to gather the natural energy by himself at the least!Again, I'm okay if he doesn't, I think,

[inesn_n]

Wow! Your reply reminds me why I fell for Naruto for starters, thanks :)

And yes Naruto wouldn't need to make Sasuke suffer, but I do lol...

and yay for fanfic :)

This is awesome!