(don't like direction of story, but cut and add things to later chapters; atypical Dael behaviour? not quite believable yet, modify)

( 'Hey! Big boy!' )

(Ancaladis angry - university unlikely to let students to class on Iron Triumph with predictable yearly mood - was this altered in other shorts?)

( No-one gave a tongue-lashing quite like Mistress Ancaladis. )

( Samara and co. talking about doing something nice for Ancaladis. Representation of fae in literature. )