Numb3rs drabble: Write Down Possibilities

Feb 14, 2007 21:45

Title: Write Down Possibilities
Pairing/Characters: Margaret, mentions of Alan, Don, Charlie.
Rating: G
Summary: She always said chocolate was better than flowers.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: none
Prompt: "Chocolate" at numb3rs100Notes/Warnings: Unbeta'd. Title from "You Treat Me Like Chocolate" by 30 Odd Foot of Grunts, who, I must admit, I'd never even heard ( Read more... )

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dragonessasmith February 15 2007, 10:06:30 UTC
That was really lovely. I love how Don's card (I'm assuming Don's) is nearly blank, because I think that speaks volumes about Don's feelings on his mom. ^^ Great work.

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sororcula February 15 2007, 18:17:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked that line; I wrote it kind of without thinking about it, and then looked at it and went, "Huh, yeah, that really works, doesn't it?" :-)

(also, I love your icon. Oh, Don.)

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ellisonbabe February 15 2007, 10:15:18 UTC
This is a really poignant piece and sadly rings true.

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sororcula February 15 2007, 18:18:03 UTC
Thank you!

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elysium1996 February 15 2007, 14:10:55 UTC
that was really lovely, nice job!

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sororcula February 15 2007, 18:18:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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irena_adler February 15 2007, 16:05:35 UTC
I loved how it wasn't obvious that it was at the cemetary, and the line "while everybody around her displays their flowers".

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sororcula February 15 2007, 18:22:24 UTC
Ah, I'm glad. I figured people would understand it, but I was slightly nervous about being vague. :-) Thank you!

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markyfic February 18 2007, 08:38:53 UTC
Made me feel little melancholy, but very sweet.

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sororcula February 18 2007, 08:40:36 UTC
Thank you! I suppose it is a bit melancholy. :-)

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