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Nov 22, 2003 15:00

death in the family
my father was hurt very young ( Read more... )

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sweetcharity November 23 2003, 08:19:15 UTC
Wow that was an amazing piece.
So touching and sad but, you wrote it beautifly.
You need to start a family. You have too much to pass on that will just die with you if you don't.
What's stopping you man?!
Take the leap.
I happen to know there's this incredible woman on LJ who is very interested in you! I think you two could do awesome things together.
I'm overstepping my bounds here I know but I think you and jacqui are such an amazingly talented couple. You guys would be soo good for each other. Don't let her slip away by waiting too long!

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What a fabulous piece! magicwoman November 24 2003, 08:26:14 UTC
I don't know what the music sounds like to go with this - but WOW - heavy duty - tough - but so good and realistic!

Susan

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jacqui November 25 2003, 15:24:36 UTC
Oh my God honey this is so beautiful, you are so beautiful, no wonder you wanted me to read this. I love you. It's going to be okay. I'm your family. I know it isn't perfect and it isn't everything you want but we're here and we want you, won't you take us and make us your own? Certainly a better alternative to the one you describe in this beautiful, tragic and moving piece.

All my love,
Jacqui

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