circular narratives are a bitch to write :0

[sobrellevar]

fill in the blanket (bed scenes)
three variations on a theme for circuity, with love. sorry for making you wait so long! i wanted to get it right, and even now i'm still not too sure i did. :s

(ths gen; chris/greta/darren if you squint; wentz/flowers; saporta/beckett; saporta/trohman)

a note: part I changes details from the events of greta’s 08.27.2006

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[slipsandtangles]

my brain and eyes are sort of out of focus after reading this, proper review when i gain coherency or when my heart stops beating out of it's chest because this was so fucking amazing i can't even begin to go into it. plus i'm going to the gay circus (panic concert) in like, twenty minutes and i'm kind peeing my pants with excitement.

[sobrellevar]

aaaah take care of that heart! it's a good heart!

& I EXPECT FULL FLAILY PHOTO-LADEN "OMG I WENT TO THE 'NOTHING RHYMES WITH HOW GAY WE ARE' CIRCUS TOUR" NEWS, ALRITE?

[slipsandtangles]

okay. so i'm going to gush about this a whole lot right now.

He is all surprises and smiles, openness, good faith. He is the kind of person stray animals would trust, although Greta doesn’t know why she thinks of him like that. OH DARREN. these lines are just too too perfect.

(Greta thinks she does this a lot, see things and people maybe once and then love them entirely too much. It’s not really a bad habit, but a guilty pleasure probably, like Chris’ cigarettes, Darren’s threadbare boyband shirts.) i think we all tend to do fall in love with things so easily, but the fact that greta falls in love with a darren's storybook is so lovely.

At some point she falls asleep again to the sound of two boys’ incongruous voices, the way their sounds and silences fill the stops and gaps. They fit. oh! the way you imply so much with just the little "they fit." oh god. you just placed the perfect chris/darren otp image in my head.

Somewhere between movies and books and television, his mouth must have learned to know better. It’s not that his

[sobrellevar]

oh gosh. you overwhelm me. thank you. ♥ you make me more enthusiastic about living.

[sobrellevar]

ok, ive calmed down from my heart going all pitterpatter in my ribs from the delightfulness of getting your feedback.

you just placed the perfect chris/darren otp image in my head.
-- WHEN I SAID I WOULD NOT STOP PUSHING MY CHRIS/DARREN AGENDA TO ALL OF FANDOM I MEANT IT. :D

i feel like this line is canon. william beckett just has a way of seduction unmatched by any other.
-- it's like, BUILT IN. in everything he does. i don't know if it's a talent or genetics or a skill earned through years of practice and discipline, like, the ballet of sexual prepositioning. i was betting the latter.

trohman/saporta = cute goofy love! <-- IAWTC. ;D

p.s. sometimes i wonder if bden spends time in their dressingrooms practicing all the gay. then i remember HEY, IT'S NOT PRACTICING ANYMORE IF YOU MEAN IT EVERY SINGLE TIME.