Starscream's Fate: Part 2/5

Apr 09, 2011 19:52


Part 2, sparkling madness and much needed comfort. Please enjoy the cutest two sparklings ever and a horny Jazz begging Prowl for a sparkling of their own.

Title: Starscream's Fate
Chapter: Chapter 2 of 5
Fandom: Transformers (G1)
Disclaimer: I do not any of the characters but I do own the plot bunny( with the help of Misy_Mina). Transformers does not ( Read more... )

starscream/red alert, sparklings, ratchet

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misty_mina April 9 2011, 20:46:52 UTC
So cute!!! ^.^ I wanna take them home!!! ^^

Another wonderful chapter. I love how you keep the sparklings so cuddlicious (is that even a word?. XD )

Just one thing, I've noticed a few, careless grammar mistakes. Like you haven't read through your chapter before you posted it.
For example, you wrote Perceptor's name wrong and typed 'Preceptor' instead.

Ok, I don't say I'm not making any mistakes, I have my fair share of them. -_-
But sometimes it helps to reread the chapter. (You don't have to overdo it like me, ...like 5 - 10 times. ^_^U Guess that's why I take so long to post my stories. uhm hehe... -.-U )

Besides, how come I haven't seen this on FF-net? You should post it. ^^ I guess many will think alike and just want to 'kidnap' the sparklings. XD

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snowy_way April 9 2011, 21:43:22 UTC
Cuddlicious? I hereby declare, (with the authority of being an Annanadale; daughter of mine onwner and many cars [Don't tell, my dad's got his own Autobot base in our estate] lol.) That is now an oficial word...

Thanks for the warning lol, I know I'm very lazy and I hate to admit it but I probably should read over my work some more. Thanks for the reminder and I'll fix it as soon as I can promises.

I'll post it on ff.net soon; I just need to open an account there. Probably around tomorrow or so.

*clears throat* Kidnapping charges is hereby declined just for you; you may keep them for tonight.

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misty_mina April 9 2011, 22:20:46 UTC
YAY *cuddles the (now officially) cuddlicious sparklings* =^_^=

Starscream should have a pacifier as well. ^^ It would look soooo adorable. XD Like this. -> http://shiroineko-sama.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=264#/d88tlc

Somehow I keep imagining now that little Inferno will run around yelling he will be (or is) a firefighter! Like that one cartoon we had on tv long ago, 'Grisu the firefighter' XD

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snowy_way April 9 2011, 23:21:03 UTC
Gah! *faints of cuteness overload* I looove those pictures! Thanks for the share. Starscream does look cute with a pacifier but I like him sucking on his plushie more; his trade mark lol.

Little widdle, Ferno. Yup, he's going to run around and scream he is a firefighter and douse Wheeljack in water! Thanks for the idea, I'll see where I can look into it.

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winafolk April 15 2011, 07:08:41 UTC
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wizzere March 4 2012, 21:25:57 UTC
Why was this never updated again? It needs to be, it's too cute not to be!

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snowy_way March 29 2012, 20:24:34 UTC
I will love I promise! Just give me some time to sort out all of my TF fics. They're all going through an overhaul and this one is on the top of my list I promise. If you don't watch this site so often for updates please find me on fanfiction.net as DarkForgiveness, it'll be posted there faster than here.

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