FIC: Unclean (PG-13)

[iulia_linnea]

Title: Unclean
Type: Fic
Age-Range Category: Four
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Severus, Harry/Hermione and Rolf/Luna
Author: blueartemis07
Beta(s): roseofthewest
Rating: PG-13
Click to View [Warning(s)]Targeted illnesses.
Summary: The Ministry has decided not to help either Hermione or Molly after it is determined that their unexpected comas are due to the use of dark magic. But what

Comments

[iulia_linnea]

Snerk. Being dropped into the action is always interesting, especially when Luna's involved! I hope that Luna and *coughs* Rolf will be very happy together.

[teryarel]

Luna is a right whirlwind! :)
That part was not really surprising (Luna is simply Luna.) - the Rolf part sure was.

[blueartemis07]

Glad I could surprise you! Thank you!

[blueartemis07]

I'm sure they will be. Thank you!

[beffeysue]

Now this is what I call a well planned story! Good for you, Mystery Author.

(I had to read it twice because I miss read something... and I had to go back and figure out what I had missed.)

Well done!

[blueartemis07]

Thank you!!

[kit10notk9]

Slightly confused.
Part of the story it said that Ginny was one of the two in the coma & part of it says that it was Molly.

I did notice that this story expands from an earlier one, where Luna saved Severus & Wizard-Witness-Protection-Program-New-IDed him as Rolf Scamandar. {forgot the title}

Fun read.

[blueartemis07]

Ginny is pregnant, sorry. Not in a coma. I will fix it after I repost it. Many thank yous!

[delphipsmith]

"There's an impregnation version?" Luna asked.

This line made me giggle like mad -- it's pretty much exactly the reaction everyone has when they find it out XD

[blueartemis07]

I know, right? LOL! Thank you!

[blueartemis07]

I love turning Severus into Rolf... Thank you!