Title:
Crystal Hideout of the Unknown SailorsWriter:
Sailor Star AngelSummary: "There's a deadly evil lurking around, but Sailor Moon and friends just aren't enough..."
Canon: Dub,
Senshi PrimeRating: 4
Name: Sherena Luke, Bianca Furriz, Mary Barrington, Kimi Kameya, Ophelia or Lia, Katiy Juckosun
Senshi Title: Sailor Star Angel/Eternal Star (which is something called a "Doma-Shin Senshi name"), Sailor Fire Rose, Sailor Dark Mercury, Sailor Nikita, Eternal Sailor Orchid, Sailor Kitty
Hair:
Sherena: An unknown color with multi-colored streaks in short pigtails in her scout form.
Kimi: Blonde, short
Katiy: "blonde hair put up into ears"
Everyone else: Not described
Eyes: Not described.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Senshi Outfit:
Sherena:
Basic: "Multi-colored wings that flashed when she moved connected to her back. She had short pigtails, but they were streaked multi-colored. Her skirt was blue and pink. Angel's bow was purple and blue. Angel's choker was purple, same with the trimming on her white gloves. Her boots were red, the trimming was green."
/w armor: "A metal armor flashed over Angel's body, there was a perfect slot for her wings. A silver and gold helmet placed itself over her head, 2 slots opened up. The pigtails popped through them."
Bianca: "Her skirt was also multi-colored but it had a hot-pink heart on the tip. Her choker was also purple, her glove trimmings were purple too. The big part of her wings were blue, the bottom part was pink. She had pure black boots, no trimmings."
Mary: Not described
Kimi: It looks exactly like Sailor Venus'.
Ophelia: Not described
Katiy: "She had a multi-colored skirt and a white velvet leotard. She had a blue and white tail coming out from her back bow."
Other Clothing Descriptions: None
Possessions:
Sherena: A locket ("decorated with angel's wings and stars and moons all around"), a small crystal paw that she brings to what is essentially Show and Tell day... in high school.
Bianca: A "soft paper" with alien writing on it.
Mary: A short staff
Kimi: A staff with a red ruby in it from the Silver Millennium, also brought for Show and Tell.
Katiy: "A silver staff with a glowing ball on it was in her hand." Her boots have rocket boosters in them.
Guardians:
Sherena: Sweet Kitty, a small light blue cat. After the scouts are reincarnated... backwards... she just appears out of nowhere in the second part.
Bianca: Crackers, a bird.
Origin:
Sherena: She is Queen Star of the Light-Blue Star (or just "Blue Star") kingdom, a new planet in the solar system that was added by Neo Queen Serenity. The planet has one moon, Zackyu, which is exempt from Pluto's control over time and teleportation because... it's new? She has a husband named King James, a shy daughter named Kitty, and a son named Blake. Her mother was Sailor Ishta-Terra (a character from Senshi Prime judging from a Google search) and died on a planet called "Alpha Senshi". She dies during a battle with Queen Darkendorf of the DarkNegaverse (which is "much stronger then the plain NegaVerse." Her actual name is "Chitrai", but she changed it when Beryl took her in because Chitrai "sounded too nice".) when Darkendorf shoots her out of the sky in a one hit kill.
Bianca: Princess Devin of Zackyu in the future. After the battle with Darkendorf, she teleported to the moon to be comforted by Neo Queen Serenity before teleporting again to the time gate to ask Pluto to send all of the senshi who died in the battle to a new life on Earth in the past. Sailor Ishta-Terra was her aunt. After she's reincarnated, she owns a temple called Blossom Hill Fire Rose ("It was a casual name, nothing to sassy.")
Mary: She was there. But it doesn't tell us where she was during the battle.
Kimi: Ditto. Ishta-Terra was her cousin (or as I-T puts it, "niece of Nikita's mother")
Ophelia: She just shows up out of nowhere when the girls decide to have a meeting at Bianca's temple. She has a younger brother named Sammzera.
Connections to Canon: Pluto sends everyone except Blake and Kitty to the past to be reincarnated and Neo Queen Serenity comforts Princess Devin after the battle. Later, they save the other scouts from some enemy with a fixation on crystal coffins that suck people into them, and they go on a camping trip for the summer.
Senshi Moves: None mentioned
Other Special Abilities: Sherena can teleport herself and other to the time gate without a key.
Annoying Traits: King James is also a Tuxedo Mask rip off, Tuxedo James. Partway through the story, Sherena's locket gets stolen and she and all of the other S.T.A.R scouts lose their memories and powers. The explaination given is that "The reason why Xanku wanted Sherena's locket was because Sherena wasn't a sailor scout for a long time so she needed some sort of remindment which was her locket."
Sherena: She has an evil sister who is Sailor Dark-Star.
Comments: I didn't bother going through "Senshi Prime" to figure out what a Doma Shin Senshi is since I'm not going to read through a 22 chapter fanfic just for one tidbit of info that could have easily been put in an author's note. Maybe another time, since the version of "Senshi Prime" this is based on is probably the one on sailorjupiter.com...
I'm not quite sure what I just read... Even without the references to another fanfic it would still read like a complete mess... and there's a another version of it that I'm going to be doing next. Though... since Sherena and pals are reincarnated into the past, does that mean that the Light-Blue turquoise star system or whatever will never go beyond that one point in history, Sherena will never get to see her future children grow up, and their souls will be stuck in what is essentially a longer version of the movie Groundhog Day?
Samples:
A battle was raging with Zackyu's generals, most of them were dead. Princess Devin saw Prince Brandon teleport into the throne room, she ran after him. Brandon took out his sword, glittering with black gems, and slashed Queen Beryl's arm. Or was it Queen Beryl? "Queen Star! I though that Beryl was dead!" Devin said, running and embracing Sailor Star Angel. Angel looked down at her and smiled. She transformed into Sailor Star Angel. Multi-colored wings that flashed when she moved connected to her back. She had short pigtails, but they were streaked multi-colored. Her skirt was blue and pink. Angel's bow was purple and blue. Angel's choker was purple, same with the trimming on her white gloves. Her boots were red, the trimming was green. A small light blue cat appeared with Sailor Star Angel, this was Sweet Kitty. Devin stared at her in amazement. The princess transformed into Sailor Fire Rose. She had long hair like Sailor Mar's but it was brown. Her skirt was also multi-colored but it had a hot-pink heart on the tip. Her choker was also purple, her glove trimmings were purple too. The big part of her wings were blue, the bottom part was pink. She had pure black boots, no trimmings. A bird appeared with Sailor Fire Rose, it was Crackers. Devin's guardian bird… Brandon stared at the mysterious sailors, he smiled at his princess. "Die Prince Brandon of Zackyu!" the strange queen said, blasting a hard and forceful blast of air against him. The prince turned around from facing Devin and saw the blast, it was to late. It hit him and he went flying out of the kingdom, into space. Sailor Star Angel was shocked, "Devin…use all your energy against this queen while I save Brandon, alright?" Devin was also shocked and so she just nodded. A metal armor flashed over Angel's body, there was a perfect slot for her wings. A silver and gold helmet placed itself over her head, 2 slots opened up. The pigtails popped through them. Devin stared at her for one more second, then remembered the queen. She turned around and screamed, "NO ONE HURTS MY BOYFRIEND!"
::A Deep and Dark Battle::
Queen Darkendorf smiled. This was her chance to kill the princess, brainwash her, and take over Zackyu! "Who are you?" asked Devin in a calmer voice. The queen replied, "I am Queen Darkendorf of the DarkNegaverse. The DarkNegaverse is much stronger then the plain NegaVerse. I plain to take over Zackyu, then slowly take over the Light-Blue Star Kingdom. Slowly I will creep over this Universe, and slowly I will become the ruler of the galaxy! Neo Queen Serenity has no clue that I'm alive, anyway…I'm also planning to kill Sherena." All this information sunk quickly into Devin's mind, but the Sherena part. Who was Sherena? "Who is Sherena?" Devin asked, in a hoarse voice. It was getting to her, Queen Darkendorf didn't have to battle Devin, she had to talk her into being horrible, being dark, being evil! "Sherena is Queen Star. She is also Sailor Star Angel, and Eternal Star. Sherena Luke is her Earth name." Darkendorf explained, getting happier by the second. Devin froze, she got an idea! "Do you know my future name of Earth?" she asked. Darkendorf corrected her, "It's past! We're in the future now! Anyway, yes I do know your past name, it's-wait! This is your plan! It won't work, I'm sorry."
::How Come Sailor Star Angel Hasn't Returned?::
Devin didn't know this but while they were talking Darkendorf sent a blast into space, heading towards Angel who was with Brandon. "How come Angel hasn't returned?" asked Devin, trying to sound nice. A piece of blood that was floating around answered her question, it floated right out of space…into the kingdom throne room…and splat! Right into Devin's hand. The princess started to cry. "How-could you?" Sailor Fire Rose couldn't keep her energy in, she blast Darkendorf with her most powerful blast. It hit the queen but she teleported to the DarkNegaverse before it stunned her. All that energy was wasted, but Angel and Brandon were dead. No! It was to much to bare, Devin de-transformed back into Princess Devin and teleported herself to the Moon. Neo Queen Serenity sat there, waiting for her. "Come and sit down Devin, you've had a long day." Devin did as she was told. "Ser-Seren-Serenity, can-*sob*-you heal? *sob*" The queen shook her head. An orb appeared in front of Devin, it showed an ugly picture. The picture was of Angel, she was still gripping Brandon, but she was dead. It was to much to bare!
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The class cheered, then stopped suddenly. As for the door had swung open. The principal stood there, with a kid right next to him. It was Mary Barrington! "Mary?" whispered Sherena, with a confused look on her face. Bianca studied Mary and whispered, "Are you in trouble?" Mary didn't have the chance to reply, she was quickly thrown into the wall. "Sherena! Bianca!" called Principal Manlery. Sherena was shocked, what had she done? Bianca quickly got up and asked, "Principal Manlery, we haven't done anything. Ask Miss Baxxter!" Bianca was use to not getting in trouble and she didn't want to start now. The principal didn't reply but motioned for Mary to get back up and follow Sherena and Bianca. The little travel to the principal's office was silent. Sherena broke the silence, "What did we do Mr. Manlery?" This time the principal replied with glee, "Violating code number 65." Bianca was confused, "Translation, please?" Mary stared at Bianca, showing to be quiet. "Ignore her Manlery, she just got a bad start in the school year." Mary tried to erase the rude comment away. It never worked, "Violation code number 65 is the most important rule of school grounds! In other words, nothing special except schoolbooks and anything to do with homework in your backpacks. And what did I find? I found a locket in Sherena's backpack! I found a short staff in Mary's backpack, then I found this piece of soft paper in Bianca's backpack that has strange alien writing on it. What's the meaning of this?"
::But Sir! I Didn't Put It There!::
Mary spoke first, she was the calmest after all, "Principal Manlery, we all promise that we have no clue who and when it got put or put by in our backpacks. We knew that rule." "Yeah, sure." Manlery ignored her. He took the piece of paper with alien writing on it and tore it into small pieces, then threw it in the trashcan. Bianca felt a jolt of pain surge through her. Next he took the locket, decorated with angel's wings and stars and moons all around, and opened it fast. Breaking the part that made it open, then he also threw that in the trashcan. Sherena felt a million ants bite her skin, a powerful surge of pain. Then Principal Manlery picked up the staff and broke it in two, then in two again. Mary jumped about 2 inches off the ground, pain was stunning her. Then Manlery pushed the 3 girls onto the floor and smirked. He put his foot of Sherena's back, who was in the middle. He put his other foot on her also. Then he grew 4 more legs! Two legs stamped on Mary, the other 2 legs smashed Bianca. Kimi Kameya was walking down the hall when this happened. She was holding a topaz gem. It gleamed golden when she was looking at the 6-legged principal. Then the gem exploded. "Nooooo! Not my birth-gem! What the-?" Kimi screamed as she was covered with golden light. She disappeared for a second then re-appeared. Looking exactly like Sailor Venus but with short hair. "I am Sailor Nikita! And let those poor 3 girls alone, education is something all teachers and kids should use wisely! Not get the education destroyed!"
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Sherena walked to class with Bianca. It was a long time since Chitrai was brought to happiness. Kimi followed the girls, she was carrying a staff with a red ruby in it, today was the day (in her class) she had to show something ancient. This staff was ancient (from the MoonKingdom) so she brought it. She smiled at it glowing a bright red, a pure symbol of Nikita. Sherena held a small crystal paw in her hand, it was glowing brightly, Sweet Kitty knew she was in human seeing reach. Bianca was carrying a piece of paper, with alien writing, the same one Mr. Manlery found. Mary was holding nothing, she was in a different class so she didn't have to bring a object. Eternal Sailor Orchid was absent, probably spending time with Terra. Mary went off to her classroom. "Goodbye guys!" she called. The other girls nodded their heads and went into Miss Baxxter's class. "Good morning class, please take out your objects. We will be skipping math for a test. Go ahead, take them out…" Miss Baxxter said, smiling through all her words. Everyone took their items out and shared them. Then it was Sherena's turn. "Go ahead Sherena." Miss Baxxter encouraged her. "*Ahem* This is my crystal paw. It was a long time ago, in the stone age or something, that this crystal was dug up. The cave people decided to carve something and made it into this shape. They dis-liked the shape and threw it into the mud, burying it. [If they didn't like it, why did they carve it into that shape to begin with?] Then, people in our time, dug up this shape and took it to a museum. The museum was robbed the day after. No one found out who robbed it, not even the security tapes. Then when I woke up one day I saw the crystal paw on my drawer. I picked it up and it glowed, no one said I couldn't have it, no one said I had to give it back. I kept it, and here it is now." Sherena reported, changing things a bit. ["Yes, yes, nice story, Ms. Lake. But you do realize that as the good samaritan that I am, I have to report you to the police now."] Class ended shortly and school was out, the friends packed up and went away to camp. Summer was here, the last day of school was over, camp awaited them.
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Then there was a deep blue light over the campsite. This light wasn't evil, yet it wasn't good, it was friendly and inviting yet mysterious. A girl popped out of the light. This girl was in sailor-form, so how possibly could she hurt these sailors? "Aye, 'za are azleep." Said the German-accented girl. The girl walked into the tent a stole Sherena's locket to transform. "Hopefully, 'ze queen will not kill 'mua." The girl said. Then the light re-appeared and the girl jumped into it, disappearing, leaving a deadly silence. The morning came and Sweet Kitty woke up. "Stupid me! Stupid me!" Sweet Kitty kept repeating that, slamming her head into a tree. Sherena heard the noise and got out of her sleeping bag and over to the bushes. "Who's there?" she said, nervous. "Sherena?" came the reply. "Yeah?" Sherena asked. "It's me, Sweet Kitty." The cat replied. "Oh….." Sherena walked back to camp. Luna came bounding up to Sherena and asked, "Where's your locket?" Sherena smiled and Luna, "It's in my trunk and you should be asking Serena that. You sound almost like…" Sherena instantly cut herself off. "What is it, child?" Luna asked. "My…my….mother!" Sherena cried, bursting out in tears. Luna jolted back one step. "Artimus! Artimus!" Luna called, stepping back in worry and running off. "Yeah, hunny-buns?" Artimus asked. "Sherena…she's…she's found out!" Luna exclaimed. "What, Luna?" asked Artimus. "That…we're…her….." Luna stopped. "HOW COULD SHE? Did you tell her?" exploded Artimus. "I never told her…." Luna got cut off, "Luna! Luna! Luna! She's suppose to learn to get on without…" Luna cut Artimus off, "I know, I know. I didn't mean for her to find out that we're her….." Artimus jumped on-top of Luna. "Why'd-urfle-you-murfle-do-argh-that?" Luna muttered under Artimus. "So no one could hear, hunny-buns." Artimus said, getting off Luna. Luna sweatdropped (anime thing! Looks like this: -.-") and purred softly in Artimus' care. Sherena walked over to Diana and asked a favor. "Sure thing, princess." Bowed Diana. Diana walked over to Luna and whispered, "Sherena would like to know more about the Inner Scouts." Luna nodded her head, glad that Sherena stopped crying.
::The Inner Scouts::
"Now then, Sherena and friends. Listen closely because this is a full proof profile of the Inner Scouts, not including Rini." Luna stopped. Rini crossed her arms and pouted. "Artimus, take it!" Luna exclaimed. Artimus smiled:
[Moon's bio copy/pasted from some other website.]
Artimus smiled at Sherena. "Like it?" asked Artimus. Sherena smiled broadly, learning her share. "I think it was rather funny." Sherena grinned. Luna stepped back, Artimus tipped his head toward the floor, this wasn't right. "Sherena?" Luna asked. "Yeah Luna?" Sherena replied. "Uh…" Luna begun. "Funny?" Artimus finished. "Yeah! Really, truly funny." Sherena replied. "Why is that?" Luna asked. "Because I have no clue what you're talkin' about! Who is this Sailor Moon weird-o? Also, why you little kitties talkin'?" Sherena asked. Luna walked over to Artimus and whispered, "She doesn't remember she's a S.T.A.R!" Artimus nodded his head and gathered up the Inner Sailors for a meeting. "Serena. Amy, Mina, Raye, Lita…Sherena has forgotten she's a S.T.A.R. That probably means that the other S.T.A.R.(s) have forgotten also." Luna stated. Serena nodded her head. Amy pulled out her mini-computer and typed information. Mina just took out a small potion and studied it. Raye instantly took out a piece of parchment and wrote and charm, she let it go into the wind. Lita just stood still, waiting for more information. "Why don't we ask Bianca, Lia, Mary and Kimi if they remember?" Artimus asked Luna. Luna nodded. "But Arty!" Mina protested. Artimus ignored her and Luna and himself walked over to the group of ex-sailors.
::How Weird Will This Get?::
"Kimi?" asked Luna. "Mary?" asked Artimus. The 2 girls looked at the cats. "Kimi, they actually talk!" exclaimed Mary, picking up Artimus. "Merow! Mary, put me down!" Artimus yowled. "Ahhh! He knows my name!" screamed Mary, dropping Artimus instantly. Luna laughed out, pointing at Artimus. "Fine, you try communicating with them, Luna." Artimus said, flicking his tail and walking over to Sweet Kitty who was in the bushes. Luna stared at Kimi, "Girls…" The 2 girls were then called by Lia and left Luna. Luna walked over to the Inner Scouts and explained, "They don't even remember that we can talk!" Raye shook her head, "It's probably a NegaVerse charm." Mina and Lita nodded in agreement. "It can't be, Luna!" Serena exclaimed. Luna shook her head, "I'm afraid so, Serena."
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"So, the party has just started, right?" Uranus snickered, looking at the blank-eyed Sherena. "Amara! This has nothing to do with you… Serena, is anything wrong?" Neptune spoke up, calling Uranus by her princess name. Uranus stepped back, way behind the silent Pluto. Saturn stepped up next to Serena and stared at Sherena. There was an intense glowing as a smaller version of the crystal paw appeared on Sherena's forehead and then disappeared. Saturn stepped back, "Dark-Pluto, what did you do to her? She's put into eternal sleep!" Dark-Pluto's eyes turned dark… "DARKY! Noooo…she couldn't of gotten you? EVERYONE GET BACK!" Star yelled. Everyone (except Sherena) jumped into the tent and zipped it up. Star kicked and punched Darky as Darky kicked and punched Star. "Xanku is playin' some game! We will never win…never…" Star fainted and Darky disappeared into an extra dark portal. Before the portal closed, Kannia jumped out. The portal closed behind her and Kannia healed Star. "Are you 'zalright?" Kannia asked, picking up Star. "Huh? Where am I?" Star asked, rubbing her head. "You fainted." Kannia said. Star shook her head, "Oh, I remember. Darky turned on us." Kannia nodded. Sherena was still sleeping on the grass, obviously having a good dream. Serena slowly un-zipped the tent door and asked, "Who are you?" to Kannia. Kannia smiled and transformed. "I am 'Zailor Atlantis. Guardian of the lost city of Atlantis and keeper of the Myztical Water!" Sailor Atlantis smiled. Bianca peeked out the door also. "How's Sherena?" Star stared at Bianca, "She's either going to die from to many dreams or stay dreaming for the rest of her life." [Instead of something more logical like say, a blood clot or starvation.] Kimi peeked out also, "How can that be possible?" Star smiled. This would take a long time, they would have to find a new leader. But know Star knew the boundaries of Xanku. They weren't any boundaries.
::Lost In A Dream::
~Sherena walked around in a pitch black room. She kept bumping into walls and screaming when a pair of eyes lurking around her. "This is to scary…" Sherena said to herself. "Is it real?" Sherena nodded her head, noticing her fate. "So, this is the end." Another voice replied, "Not really." Sherena's eyes widened, "Who are you?" The voice continued, "I cannot tell but I will tell you this. Search your past for something more then a normal life. When finding it, your fate will turn to your future. I am gone…" The voice disappeared. "No, come back! What do you mean?" Sherena searched around like the voice said. All she found was darkness. "Voice! Come back, what do you mean?" Sherena cried. There was a weird sound at the other side of the room.