Chloe and Oliver at the hospital with Connor was really sweet and Connor wanting Ollie to stay with him was awesome to read.
I'm so glad Chloe and Oliver hashed out a few more things. Chloe realizing fully how big of a mistake she made really was a long time coming. I loved that Oliver told her the truth about the Fate Helmet, and that he and Dinah hadn't been together before she left or even for years after Connor was born.
Oooh didn't expect the Dark Archer to be brought into this story... interesting twist. Can't wait to see how that plays out and to see what happens when they finally tell Connor the truth!
The main theme of the story is cause and affect, like how Chloe took in the Fate's Helmet glance into the future, and how that affected everyones lives. And how not telling Connor sooner about Oliver, has caused other complications that have only snowballed even after Oliver thought he was finally in the clear.
Dark Archer was always going to be apart of this fic because when I first was inspired to write it, two scenes appeared in my head. The first being between Connor and Oliver when Connor shows him his room for the first time, and the second between Dark Archer and Connor. Without it, the ending I had planned wouldn't be as affective.
On the brightside, you only have four more chapters?
I was wondering why you hadn't updated in a while...turns out you did! It was nice reading two chapters at once! there is so much going on!!! first off....you guys write so well that i wasn't even anticipating nuts in the brownie. Second....this dark archer thing...twist!!! he really needs to stop stalking ollie. And i am still curious as to what connor had nic post!!!! great job!!!
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Chloe and Oliver at the hospital with Connor was really sweet and Connor wanting Ollie to stay with him was awesome to read.
I'm so glad Chloe and Oliver hashed out a few more things. Chloe realizing fully how big of a mistake she made really was a long time coming. I loved that Oliver told her the truth about the Fate Helmet, and that he and Dinah hadn't been together before she left or even for years after Connor was born.
Oooh didn't expect the Dark Archer to be brought into this story... interesting twist. Can't wait to see how that plays out and to see what happens when they finally tell Connor the truth!
Amazing update Hun! :)
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Dark Archer was always going to be apart of this fic because when I first was inspired to write it, two scenes appeared in my head. The first being between Connor and Oliver when Connor shows him his room for the first time, and the second between Dark Archer and Connor. Without it, the ending I had planned wouldn't be as affective.
On the brightside, you only have four more chapters?
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That was a twist having the Dark Archer know about Ollie's son. Also, I am so touched by how Connor is opening up to Oliver, it's sweet. <3
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