Title: Unfaithful Characters: Hermione/Severus Rating: R Challenge: Muggle Literature Word Count: 100 Authors Notes: Muggle book used for quote: The Lovely Bones, Alice Sebold (Pg 197) Cross-posted to grangersnape100.
It's not a serious RP. I started it to feel out the characters...timeline's still fuzzy. Basically: "People Like Us," then the RP starts in November, Hermione found Li's LJ, Harry just arrived in China...and this is where "Miracle Drug" starts. Although I've only written a cookie on that :-P
Loved this line: “Stay,” Severus murmured. And her heart almost broke again. “Next time.” You get the feeling that he asks her that every time, and the answer is always the same.
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*g* Glad to see you writing again.
I love this phrase: "as her heart stilled after rising passion"
...And wasn't that book creepy? O_o
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Oh, it was very different - kind of ... weird pov you know, all seeing.
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Well considering she's dead and she's looking down from "heaven" or wherever it is she ends up in...
Did it end badly? Or happy?
Also, gelsey and I think you should join us.
It's not a serious RP. I started it to feel out the characters...timeline's still fuzzy. Basically: "People Like Us," then the RP starts in November, Hermione found Li's LJ, Harry just arrived in China...and this is where "Miracle Drug" starts. Although I've only written a cookie on that :-P
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And her heart almost broke again. “Next time.”
You get the feeling that he asks her that every time, and the answer is always the same.
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I think I had that feeling as well. Poor Severus.
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