Unfaithful

Feb 05, 2007 06:11

Title: Unfaithful
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Rating: R
Challenge: Muggle Literature
Word Count: 100
Authors Notes: Muggle book used for quote: The Lovely Bones, Alice Sebold (Pg 197)
Cross-posted to grangersnape100.

Unfaithful )

char: hermione, char: severus, prompt: muggle lit

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lilian_cho February 4 2007, 20:26:48 UTC
That shameless hussy! >=O

...

*g* Glad to see you writing again.

I love this phrase: "as her heart stilled after rising passion"

...And wasn't that book creepy? O_o

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somigliana February 5 2007, 04:29:47 UTC
Thank you - getting back into it slowly. I think drabbles are best for a kick start :D

Oh, it was very different - kind of ... weird pov you know, all seeing.

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:-) lilian_cho February 5 2007, 20:03:41 UTC
:-)

Well considering she's dead and she's looking down from "heaven" or wherever it is she ends up in...
Did it end badly? Or happy?

Also, gelsey and I think you should join us.

It's not a serious RP. I started it to feel out the characters...timeline's still fuzzy. Basically: "People Like Us," then the RP starts in November, Hermione found Li's LJ, Harry just arrived in China...and this is where "Miracle Drug" starts. Although I've only written a cookie on that :-P

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herald_comm February 4 2007, 21:29:22 UTC
Loved this line: “Stay,” Severus murmured.
And her heart almost broke again. “Next time.”
You get the feeling that he asks her that every time, and the answer is always the same.

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somigliana February 5 2007, 04:30:58 UTC
Thank you.

I think I had that feeling as well. Poor Severus.

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