Through Sickness and Health, Part 3

[skipturnstep]

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 3
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 4,424
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 Part 2

WARNING! Spoilers under the cut.

Comments

[bonomanic]

Oh god. I was smiling through the entire first half because it was so perfect and I had expected the accident to be much, much worse, so I was kind of relieved it went like this in your story. After all, I knew Kyu would wake up and make it through, so I didn't have to worry too much

[skipturnstep]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was a little concerned that this part was a little too depressing but I promise it won't be so bad in the next part.

Also, I thought I would say that I absolutely love your replies. You always put so much thought into it and your opinions really inspire me to keep doing this fic, because honestly this fic was not going to be ANYTHING like this -- it wasn't even going to be Kyuhae at all. This is actually way out of my normal writing style, although I think I prefer this style compared to my other one, but this is entirely experimental. So thank you for reading and taking the time to post your opinions! It means a lot.

[bonomanic]

Depressing can be fantastic for stories, it makes you appreciate all the good things even more. :) And, well, without the depressing moments, this story wouldn't be so good because there's no relationship without down, so it make this seem all the more real. Though I admit I'm glad you said it'll be better in the next part. =3

And, well, thank you! *glomp* I'm happy my comments make you a little happier. I think that when I'm reading a wonderful story such as this that pulls me in and makes me feel, then the least I can do is to try and thank the author through a comment. ^^'' If you say this is not your normal style, I need to go and check out your other stories some time, to see what they're like. But I'd say your experiment went well.

So, out of curiousity - what was this story going to be like when you first had it in mind? =3

[skipturnstep]

^^ Thank you! I've only posted a one-shot which was your typical Kyuhae smut!fic. Nothing spectacular, because it was the first fic I had written in over a year, keke.

This was originally called At Least I Still Have You, and it didn't really have a plot when I first started. All I knew was that it was going to be Qmi and Eunhae, two pairings which I will even admit aren't my favorites. (My favorite is Kyuhae, clearly! Haha.) It didn't really have any direction, it was just..well, it was shit. Absolutely horrible.
So I figured I'd go back to my roots and give a try at a chaptered Kyuhae fic, and that's how this came out! :3

But again, seriously. Thank you so much for your comments, they really do brighten my day! ^^

[billa_katto]

ohh noo!!..at the begging reading seme!Kyu..was like..ok...well i love my kyu being the uke..but it's ok..i can handle it...but then!!!the broken HaeKyu!!!..ohh no please!!!
and it's all because of kyu~..please tell me that..that hickey was because MiMi rape kyuhyun..but it was against his will!!!

continue soon!!!!!
sarangheoo~~..
kisses
i really love it

[skipturnstep]

Thank you for reading ^^ The next part will be up in a few days.

[skipturnstep]

Thank you so much! I promise the next chapter won't be so upsetting ^^ Expect it within the next few days!

[kamerer220]

I really enjoyed this, even though I hate to think of MiMi as a homewrecker, it is well constructed.
As an English major and a fan of Alfred Lord Tennyson this line was actually my favorite
"Donghae remembers thinking that was the stupidest phrase ever invented, and Alfred Lord Tennyson should be punched in the mouth."

[skipturnstep]

I'm glad you liked it! Mimi really isn't as awful in this story as he seems here, I promise!

[lahaela]

It's really weird having Eunhyuk in your story and no Eunhae, but I like it. I think I'm going to start following Kyuhae now, I forgot they're a legit pairing because Eunhae/Kyumin always overshadows the other pairings. Still, like the Don't Don Replay Convo, they could totally work together.

Although I'm a big fan of Henry, I actually never liked Zhoumi that much. I'm starting to warm up to him more [now that Hankyung is leaving, maybe?] but since I never liked him I'm happy with your choice of who Kyuhyun 'cheats' with. Does this count as Kyuhyun having an affair?

Anyway, can't wait to read part four/rest of your writing :]

[skipturnstep]

Yeah, see, I always saw Donghae and Eunhyuk more as brothers than being an actual pairing for some reason, like Eunhyuk would be Donghae's advice columnist and they would support each other no matter what. :)

I find Zhou Mi fierce as hell! But as in like, he's a maneater~ kind of way, haha. I'll let you in on a little secret; Kyuhyun and Zhou Mi's relationship does continue a little bit in this story, but it's not a permanent relationship.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! ^^

[lahaela]

Haha I just watched a video where Eunhyuk kept on denying their friendship. There were multiple videos where Donghae goes "We're friends, we have a friendship that lasted 7 years, we were friends before we entered SJ" and Eunhyuk goes "No no our relationship: actually we think of each other as colleagues, as coworkers..yeah, we're just colleagues." XD It was hilarious.

I love Eunhyuk's personality here, he's just like "....Dude." And how they meet at a cafe, it's awesome. Admittedly, it feels weird not having my normal Eunhae [I write Eunhae] but its k because Eunhyuk is still a boss~

Honestly, I can't wait for the Qmi to break up...but I will look forward to Hae coming back as a shining white knight~~

[skipturnstep]

Awww! Well I'll have to see what you've written, take a little looksee~

Honestly I'm really quite attached to Kyuhae because they were the first pairing I discovered when I got into Super Junior, and then I was introduced to the even-more-popular Qmi but for some reason I can't bring myself to really truly appreciate Qmi like I appreciate Kyuhae.