Through Sickness and Health, Part 3

Aug 01, 2010 17:41

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 3
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 4,424
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 Part 2

WARNING! Spoilers under the cut.

This is just the calm before the storm. )

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bonomanic August 1 2010, 22:10:08 UTC
Oh god. I was smiling through the entire first half because it was so perfect and I had expected the accident to be much, much worse, so I was kind of relieved it went like this in your story. After all, I knew Kyu would wake up and make it through, so I didn't have to worry too much ( ... )

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skipturnstep August 1 2010, 22:36:20 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was a little concerned that this part was a little too depressing but I promise it won't be so bad in the next part.

Also, I thought I would say that I absolutely love your replies. You always put so much thought into it and your opinions really inspire me to keep doing this fic, because honestly this fic was not going to be ANYTHING like this -- it wasn't even going to be Kyuhae at all. This is actually way out of my normal writing style, although I think I prefer this style compared to my other one, but this is entirely experimental. So thank you for reading and taking the time to post your opinions! It means a lot.

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bonomanic August 1 2010, 22:50:13 UTC
Depressing can be fantastic for stories, it makes you appreciate all the good things even more. :) And, well, without the depressing moments, this story wouldn't be so good because there's no relationship without down, so it make this seem all the more real. Though I admit I'm glad you said it'll be better in the next part. =3

And, well, thank you! *glomp* I'm happy my comments make you a little happier. I think that when I'm reading a wonderful story such as this that pulls me in and makes me feel, then the least I can do is to try and thank the author through a comment. ^^'' If you say this is not your normal style, I need to go and check out your other stories some time, to see what they're like. But I'd say your experiment went well.

So, out of curiousity - what was this story going to be like when you first had it in mind? =3

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skipturnstep August 1 2010, 23:02:45 UTC
^^ Thank you! I've only posted a one-shot which was your typical Kyuhae smut!fic. Nothing spectacular, because it was the first fic I had written in over a year, keke.

This was originally called At Least I Still Have You, and it didn't really have a plot when I first started. All I knew was that it was going to be Qmi and Eunhae, two pairings which I will even admit aren't my favorites. (My favorite is Kyuhae, clearly! Haha.) It didn't really have any direction, it was just..well, it was shit. Absolutely horrible.
So I figured I'd go back to my roots and give a try at a chaptered Kyuhae fic, and that's how this came out! :3

But again, seriously. Thank you so much for your comments, they really do brighten my day! ^^

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bonomanic August 2 2010, 13:59:37 UTC
Oh, if it's Kyuhae smut, then I have to read it all the more. xD No, kidding, I'd read it even if you said it was Eunhae and I just don't read that. I mean, I tried and all, but I just don't feel them as a couple. I adore their friendship possibly more than any other in SuJu (maybe except Kangteuk), but reading fic about them as couple never works for me. I tried with some of the very best Eunhae fic out there (a friend of mine here is an avid Eunhae shipper and tried to get me to see the romantic aspect of them, so she recced a bit), and it was great writing but... well, didn't work out. Still, I'd have read it if it was yours. :DDD ( ... )

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skipturnstep August 2 2010, 15:29:11 UTC
I'm the exact same way with Eunhae. They seem more like brothers than a couple, it almost seems wrong to make them romantically involved with each other. They have this bond; like, they're the third party you go to talk to when you're involved with a nasty situation and need an outside opinion. I don't know, I don't see the romance! Haha.

Thank you! ^^ Qmi is a very temporary state of being in this fic, but that's all I'm going to say about that. I do have this story planned to go right up to the promotions for the fourth album, although that may change depending on how I flesh out what I've got planned. All I know is that it will come very close to present day Super Junior. ^__^

You're one of my very most devoted readers, so I just felt the need to show my appreciation ^^

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bonomanic August 3 2010, 11:04:45 UTC
Very true. :) I think if even pimp posts don't strike any chord, I might as well just give up and stick to Kyuhae (and some other things I read, but don't really ship). The best visuals and dynamics for me. ^^

Ah, it sounds great! :D Hope you have fun writing it! ^^

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