there are places I remember

Mar 22, 2011 02:06

Title: If It Hadn't Been for Love (or Days of Future Past)
Fandom: Super Junior
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Kihae
Summary: Kibum takes a leap of faith
A/N: first of all, definite TWT label getting slapped on this fic. After that, inestimable thanks to all the people that have helped me pick this apart and piece it back together over the past ten months ( Read more... )

pairing: kihae, format: oneshot, rating: pg13, author: remixied, fandom: super junior

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blahnicity March 22 2011, 12:28:40 UTC
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I'M GOING TO CLASS NOW LIKE A GOOD STUDENT BUT

I'LL BE BAAACKKK KOREAN KOREAN KOOOREEAAAAAN~




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blahnicity March 23 2011, 13:21:56 UTC
o/

this is really cool. It flowed well that it wasn't that confusing to see what you did, and while another read through wasn't needed to understand it I found myself doing it anyway because your writing was just so good.

I really like the way the lines cross through the timeline but how each sort of bleed through to the next bit is relevant and shows how kihae have come together from kids to a relationship to a really mature relationship with jobs and a family and then into that stage of being really settled, with their daughter's wedding.

really beautiful :)

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remixied April 2 2011, 06:09:38 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA THIS WOULD BE NOTHING W/O ALL THE BETA HELP I GOT /DIES ENDLESSLY WHY U TELL ME TO WRITE PLOT FOR? LOOK WHAT HAPPENS. I HOLD YOU ENTIRELY RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS TRIPE AND ANGEL AU AND DINER AU AND OTHER THINGS THAT WILL NEVER MAKE IT OUT OF MY GOOGLE DOCS /ROLLS ON AND WHALES :3 your comment's so thorough and sweet /keeps it in my pocket thanks for having some faith in me bby ♥ /whales

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