[fic: "Laws of Gravity", Ray/Ray, due South, rated T]
Title: Laws of Gravity
Author: sionnain
Rating: Teen
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Ray/Ray
Summary: It really makes Ray wonder why he goes grocery shopping with Kowalski, when that activity is probably outlawed by the Geneva Convention as cruel and unusual torture
AN: Thanks to Waltzforanight for a beta! Written for the lovely Mizface on her birthday!
( Laws of Gravity )
Author: sionnain
Rating: Teen
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Ray/Ray
Summary: It really makes Ray wonder why he goes grocery shopping with Kowalski, when that activity is probably outlawed by the Geneva Convention as cruel and unusual torture
AN: Thanks to Waltzforanight for a beta! Written for the lovely Mizface on her birthday!
( Laws of Gravity )
Okay, so first off I loved this. Which you have to know I would, but I'm saying it anyhow. I was laughing out loud and awwwwing and just melty, and here's some of the reasons why:
You had me with the first sentence - LOVE that RayV sees shopping with RayK as something you have to try to win at
If Kowalski is a pinball, Ray's beginning to feel like the...whatever the hell those things are called at the bottom, the flippy things that bounce the pinball back up onto the board. Those things. Or else he's the moron kid putting quarter after quarter in a game that's impossible to win. Like the one with the claw and all the stuffed animals. made me LOL
Vecchio's inner monologue of complaints
RayK picking food because the label is cool
they're starting to act like each other! awwwwwww
RayV callling RayK babe
Ray can't help it, he has to know. "What question? If hurling glass at eggs will make them break? That was really a question you had? Wow, Kowalski. I didn't realize you had so many problems with the concept of gravity."
Kowalski flips him off, then says, "The one about who would win in a fight, a chicken or a dragon."
"That's actually a question?" omg I was laughing so hard at this, and the next bit I must quote
Ray is used to Kowalski-logic by this point, has a degree and provides translations free of charge, but this is a stretch even for him. "If by science you mean Jurassic Park, yeah. But dragons aren't dinosaurs, Kowalski." lovelovelove
RayK wanting to keep their cars safe!
RayK reading Weekly World News (which maybe i also liked to read)
beating insomnia by imagining animal fights *pets RayK*
"As compared to the time when they never had dragons?" I so loved this line
kissing in the checkout line!
And just because I didn't quote it doesn't mean I don't love the rest, because I really do.
Thank you again, and I am just as excited about getting to meet you in April! Seriously, only dogs will be able to hear the squeeee. *hugs you carefully, since you're all post-surgery*
Reply
::twirls you::
I think there scientifically can never, ever be enough Ray/Ray curtain!fic, okay. THE TWO OF THEM BEING DOMESTIC IS BASICALLY THE CUTEST THING EVER, AMIRITE?
Happy Birthday, and yay! So glad you liked it!!
\miz/
\bitchin' party/
Reply
Leave a comment