The Fifth Act, Chapter 36

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  I've reached that stage of a fic where I get insecure and second-guess every single paragraph, so I have absolutely no idea if this chapter is ready for people's eyes or not.  As always, please feel free to point

Comments

[ixtey]

Two chapters left... it will be hard for me to forget my "frequently-refresh-my-email-every-sunday-night-in-hopes-of-another-update" tendencies. :PP

The way you depicted Cloud's fading in and out of consciousness was great. And the way he kept going on, struggling to never forget his name.

Oh Genesis, you. :33 jsdflksd Reading to Cloud while he's unconscious. It strikes me as really romantic. *swoons* o/////o At least in managed to comfort Cloud to go back to sleep.

The Planet helping Cloud. Awesome. I do think they'd known this was going to happen all along. [Or maybe it's not the planet at all. Maybe it's Jenova. Powering up her other son. Now that he's stronger than Seph. *shudders*Angeal's POV. Good to know that he's gotten on all right with degradation, and still manages to watch over his friends. The moment with Cloud, with him buster sword-less and all. Sighhhhhhh

[sinnatious]

Hopefully only two. Depends how efficient I am at tying up the remaining loose ends and conversations. ^_^;

XD Your slash goggles are firmly fastened, I see. I guess poetry IS kind of romantic... especially when the other person is sleeping. Oh god, stop making me want to write sidefic.

I based Zack rushing into the mansion off his rush into the burning house in Crisis Core to rescue the kid's mother. But yeah, you're right, totally stupid. BUT A GREAT CHANCE FOR GENESIS TO SHOW OFF. :D Originally I had him stay outside like a good boy but that was boring and not-very-Zack, so the whole scene got a rewrite.

I appreciate your use of white text, but I'm confirming nothing. :3

[ixtey]

My slash-goggled mind suddenly thought of a smuttier alternative to the confrontation scene: What if Sephiroth had taken a leaf out of the Golden Saucer play-writer's book and decided to test out the power of 'true love'? There might've been some awesome R-rated happenings between Seph and Cloud and Jenova'll be like

[sinnatious]

XDDDDD THAT IS JUST ABOUT THE BEST THING EVER.

*snickers* Right eyes and everything.

[chocolatepuzzle]

YES PLEASE. An alternate ending perhaps...?