The Fifth Act, Chapter 36
Title: The Fifth Act
Rating: T for violence.
Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.
Author's Note: I've reached that stage of a fic where I get insecure and second-guess every single paragraph, so I have absolutely no idea if this chapter is ready for people's eyes or not. As always, please feel free to point ( Read more... )
The way you depicted Cloud's fading in and out of consciousness was great. And the way he kept going on, struggling to never forget his name.
Oh Genesis, you. :33 jsdflksd Reading to Cloud while he's unconscious. It strikes me as really romantic. *swoons* o/////o At least in managed to comfort Cloud to go back to sleep.
The Planet helping Cloud. Awesome. I do think they'd known this was going to happen all along. [Or maybe it's not the planet at all. Maybe it's Jenova. Powering up her other son. Now that he's stronger than Seph. *shudders*]
Angeal's POV. Good to know that he's gotten on all right with degradation, and still manages to watch over his friends. The moment with Cloud, with him buster sword-less and all. Sighhhhhhh.
idk, but I thought it was a real stupid move when Zack rushed into the mansion. He should've at least bought ice materia to stop the fire with. Or something like that. But Zack was panicking, so maybe it's alright that he didn't manage to think it through that much. It's a good thing that Genesis got his back. <3
asjkhsad. The confrontation part was awesooooome. LIKE, CLOUD, SEPH IS TOTALLY SANE, YO.
Sephiroth paused. “Cloud… your eyes-”
Oh no. This isn't what I think it is, is it? [Is it Cloud under Jenova's influence now? Was the voice in his head telling him to wake up, Jenova?] Or maybe I'm just reading into this too much? But if it is... damn. You're really, really, really good at plot twists.
Thank you for your update, it is made of awesome. And genius. And everything. OwO Looking forward to the last two chapters! :D Will be checking for mistakes, now.
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XD Your slash goggles are firmly fastened, I see. I guess poetry IS kind of romantic... especially when the other person is sleeping. Oh god, stop making me want to write sidefic.
I based Zack rushing into the mansion off his rush into the burning house in Crisis Core to rescue the kid's mother. But yeah, you're right, totally stupid. BUT A GREAT CHANCE FOR GENESIS TO SHOW OFF. :D Originally I had him stay outside like a good boy but that was boring and not-very-Zack, so the whole scene got a rewrite.
I appreciate your use of white text, but I'm confirming nothing. :3
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My slash-goggled mind suddenly thought of a smuttier alternative to the confrontation scene: What if Sephiroth had taken a leaf out of the Golden Saucer play-writer's book and decided to test out the power of 'true love'? There might've been some awesome R-rated happenings between Seph and Cloud and Jenova'll be like
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*snickers* Right eyes and everything.
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