Paper Thin // Soubi/Ritsuka // PG-13/R

[silvered_tongue]

Title: Paper Thin
Author: Neko-chan
Pairing: Soubi/Ritsuka [LOVELESS]
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: Because sometimes the difference between two things is only paper thin.
Author's Notes: Writing spree! :D For my darling Lucefig. ♥

Comments

[evaleva]

Oh my GOD. This is utterly gorgeous, Bry; I can't tell you how honored I am that you dedicated this to me. You say so much in so few words, with this haunting images and feelings - a;solifdhngae I can't even begin to express myself. The entire second and third sections are so beautiful, and I adore this line in the third section: Soubi lies awake, dreaming of a dreamless sleep, seeing only butterflies. The ending, too, is heartbreaking. Soubi's pain, Ritsuka's longing, the past that haunts them both - it's absolutely lovely. Thank you so much, hon. And if this is an outflow of your frustration with your writing, then BY ALL MEANS, throw it down some more. All of us writers feel it from time to time (mine, unfortunately, has been plaguing me for some time now. *wry smile), but if this does not defy your worries, I don't know what will. :D

[silvered_tongue]

...your comment makes me wibble in all sorts of good ways. ;~; I suppose I should be grateful for the fic!bug, because... well. XD; I'm not done yet with anything. :D; *plans to write more!* But I suppose that this mini-spree has gotten my confidence up a little bit--or perhaps it's just your comment. Which is amazing and made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you, my Lucefig. ;~; ♥♥tothenthpower!

[evaleva]

Awww, I'm glad sweetie. *hugs tight* You know I think the world of your writing and it made me sad when you were undergoing your writingangst - though it seems from your and another friend of mine's experience that it is simply a product of being a writer. You'll recover from it, and probably suffer from it again, but I think doubting your writing and challenging it makes it stronger in the end. <3 <3

[innusiq]

Oh, damn, that ended sadly, but it was beautiful in its sadness. *sniff-sniff*

[silvered_tongue]

I'm sorry. XD; I have a nasty habit to lean towards ending my stories on a rather 'empty' note. ^^; The second drabble/fic ends on a much nicer note, I promise. ^^ Thank you for the comment~ ♥

[sagakure]

It's sad but so so pretty! ;____;
I love how you made it be several different little pieces! *loves the idea itself, as well as each of the little pieces* I have a big weak spot for that way of telling a story, and yours was so lovely. :3

I hope you'll feel better soon! ^^// *sends lots of feel-better waves*

[missykitty0115]

Aw, the ending is so beautifully sad... ;~;
I liked it though, short and sweet and to the point. :)