A meme - made by me!

Mar 23, 2007 20:36

Black boots, tight black jeans emphasising the long slender legs.  A red sleeveless top with a black Chinese dragon design that curled and curved all around his torso, his shoulders and arms looking strong.  He had a wide grin and bright eyes that danced with merriment in his heart shaped face.  But most noticeable were the piercings.  A bar in his left eyebrow, a stud of some black stone in the lobe of his right ear and three silver rings along the rim.  And those are just the ones I can see, Quatre thought faintly.  The long black coat he’d been carrying was slung onto the other bed and he approached Quatre, still grinning cheerfully, hand outstretched.
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Black boots, unyielding black jeans emphasising the long meagre legs.  A red sleeveless top with a black Chinese dragon design that curled and curved all around his torso, his shoulders and arms looking strong.  He had a spacious grin and bright eyes that danced with merriment in his heart shaped face.  But most noticeable were the piercings.  A bar in his left eyebrow, a stud of some black stone in the lobe of his right ear and three silver rings along the rim.  And those are just the ones I can see, Quatre thought indistinctly.  The long black coat he’d been carrying was slung onto the other bed and he approached Quatre, still grinning with a smile, hand widely spread.

Heheh come on, you try!  :-D

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