New fic :)
Falling Away with You
Author: roxierose13
Rating: PG
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Complete: Yes
Summary: As Draco is pulled from the castle, he watches as his life falls apart.
Response to june challenge from thehexfiles: Remember at the end of Half Blood Prince where Harry is chasing Snape and Draco across the grounds of Hogwarts? Write a one-
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Where to start? I've never read a piece that focuses on Draco's feelings as he is hurried away from Hogwarts by the Half-Blood Prince.
The way you have portrayed how Draco feels about not only leaving a sanctuary he has known for very long, but from his new salvation, is just stunning.
I like how half of this piece is the time period of a minute or so, as they are racing across the lawsn, but you stretch it out in such a way that it seems like days are hopelessly whipping by, and there is nothing either boy can do to pause it.
To me, Draco's thought processes are so flowing, so real, that I absolutely believe it, and it breaks my heart. In my mind, I can see the numb fear, the desperate desire to just confess, and break away from Snape to follow his heart, all conflicting in his eyes, showing in the contortions of his expressions.
I love this piece. Normally I do not like sad works, but this moved me to actually comment.
May we be livejournal friends?
Would you consider writing from Harry's and Snape's perspective, respectively?
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