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so update de me.
contest went ok, won both thigs but killed ankle.
vicki thinks i have a torn ligament. oh goodie.
yea, the dance was fun,i guess, no nick but i expected that.
still haven't decided if i should give up on nick, i wonder if he hates me....?
so here's a snipet of my story, just the prologue, please take a look and let me know what i should fix:
Everything in the room glistened white, from the flowers to the chairs, the ceiling, and most importantly, the couple who stood together, hands joined at the front of the gleaming aisle. The whole room was filled with the friends and families of Joesph Friedman, an unknowing muggle, and Hermione Granger, witch in secret.
With his snow white tux and her matching lace wedding dress, when the two stood close, hands clasped betwen them, the surrounding supporters were hard pressed to tell where one stopped and the other began.
It is often believed that on this occasion, there wasn't a single dry eye in that room, but that is one rumour never to be confirmed. The only thing known close to this tale is the amount of hankerchiefs used (pronely by women) as the two exchanged life-long vows.
More than likely though, the most memorable moment came as the two were forever joined in wedlock, and sealed it with a kiss. THe crowd around them dole out thunderous appalause and a standing ovation as Mr and Mrs Joesph Friedman took their first steps together towards a new, conjoined life
that's it...any and all comments welcome.
still searching for a title...
contest went ok, won both thigs but killed ankle.
vicki thinks i have a torn ligament. oh goodie.
yea, the dance was fun,i guess, no nick but i expected that.
still haven't decided if i should give up on nick, i wonder if he hates me....?
so here's a snipet of my story, just the prologue, please take a look and let me know what i should fix:
Everything in the room glistened white, from the flowers to the chairs, the ceiling, and most importantly, the couple who stood together, hands joined at the front of the gleaming aisle. The whole room was filled with the friends and families of Joesph Friedman, an unknowing muggle, and Hermione Granger, witch in secret.
With his snow white tux and her matching lace wedding dress, when the two stood close, hands clasped betwen them, the surrounding supporters were hard pressed to tell where one stopped and the other began.
It is often believed that on this occasion, there wasn't a single dry eye in that room, but that is one rumour never to be confirmed. The only thing known close to this tale is the amount of hankerchiefs used (pronely by women) as the two exchanged life-long vows.
More than likely though, the most memorable moment came as the two were forever joined in wedlock, and sealed it with a kiss. THe crowd around them dole out thunderous appalause and a standing ovation as Mr and Mrs Joesph Friedman took their first steps together towards a new, conjoined life
that's it...any and all comments welcome.
still searching for a title...