Comments | silberstreif: Aftermath - Chapter 10: Bluestreak

silberstreif

Aftermath - Chapter 10: Bluestreak

Jan 22, 2014 21:48

Universe: Till all are one
Beta: Starfire201
Continuation: AU, G1
Genre: Adventure, drama
Characters: Bluestreak, Rook, others mentioned

Summary: Again he had to clamp down on the surging battle protocols. Nothing would be worse than to kill a mech who had done nothing but state his job in front of a good dozen of witnesses. He sighed deeply. "I ( Read more... )

character: prowl, character: jazz, after-war, transformer, character: bluestreak, au, universe: aftermath

Comments 12

tiamat1972 January 22 2014, 22:48:14 UTC

Looks like I was partly right, Prowl and Jazz were protecting someone. I was just wrong about who. It's sad to think that Optimus was so naive.

Loving this fic but I need tissues whenever I read it.

silberstreif January 23 2014, 16:04:42 UTC

*hands out tissues* I hope it's not too bad with the feelings. :)

Yes, they were protecting someone. ^^ And Optimus... mh, I admit I have a problem with writing him. I love him as the sparkdeep good mech that he is in G1. But how can one remain like this during a war of such monstrous proportions? So my Optimus was always shielded as much as possible by everyone. Not to say that he hasn't made many bad decisions and so on, but... yeah, there was always someone who cushioned the fall. Makes sense?

Thanks for your review!

tiamat1972 January 23 2014, 18:25:21 UTC

Makes perfect sense. Just still sad. I hope he realises how much Prowl and Jazz sacrificed for him and everyone else.

silberstreif January 25 2014, 18:02:00 UTC

Somehow that I don't doubt he'll realises it some day. And he'll grieve for them.

rose0mary January 24 2014, 02:12:54 UTC

*snickers ( ... )

silberstreif January 25 2014, 18:15:34 UTC

It was an "inevitable" story kind of. :) The trial had to, could go only one way ( ... )

neverminetohold February 4 2014, 16:02:52 UTC

Wow! °_0 I should be more eloquent, but you always render me speechless these days with your world-building and all those sensitive topics like child soldiers that you incorporate so seamlessly and handle with Prowl-like laser precision!

I'm looking forward to the epilogue! *sniffs into tissues*

silberstreif February 5 2014, 15:48:27 UTC

You're reviews always manage to make me grin like a fool. :D

Childsoldiers, I've wondered about this before and yeah... I will delve deeper into this theme and universe. Motormaster is one Decepticon who defintely got the short, short stick on that matter.

Thanks. ^^ Friday is the last exam, I hope then I have more time!

neverminetohold February 9 2014, 14:48:04 UTC

Really? ^o^ I'm glad to be of service! ;) Though I really wish I were more eloquent T-T They used to be far longer, but I guess the bigger the emotional impact the more trouble I have with expressing my thoughts... Or perhaps I'm currently pouring all of it into my own FFs? XD

I hope all went well with your exam! :)

silberstreif February 13 2014, 13:22:23 UTC

Really. ^^

I've noticed that the length of my reviews has more to do with time than emotional impact. ^^" And if I care about the story and/or the author.
But one's own FFs can really shift the focus to, well, the own writing and nothing else. At least with me it's like that.

I will know tonight, what the grades are.

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