Aftermath - Chapter 10: Bluestreak

[silberstreif]

Universe: Till all are one
Beta: Starfire201
Continuation: AU, G1
Genre: Adventure, drama
Characters: Bluestreak, Rook, others mentioned

Summary: Again he had to clamp down on the surging battle protocols. Nothing would be worse than to kill a mech who had done nothing but state his job in front of a good dozen of witnesses. He sighed deeply. "I

Comments

[neverminetohold]

Wow! °_0 I should be more eloquent, but you always render me speechless these days with your world-building and all those sensitive topics like child soldiers that you incorporate so seamlessly and handle with Prowl-like laser precision!

I'm looking forward to the epilogue! *sniffs into tissues*

[silberstreif]

You're reviews always manage to make me grin like a fool. :D

Childsoldiers, I've wondered about this before and yeah... I will delve deeper into this theme and universe. Motormaster is one Decepticon who defintely got the short, short stick on that matter.

Thanks. ^^ Friday is the last exam, I hope then I have more time!

[neverminetohold]

Really? ^o^ I'm glad to be of service! ;) Though I really wish I were more eloquent T-T They used to be far longer, but I guess the bigger the emotional impact the more trouble I have with expressing my thoughts... Or perhaps I'm currently pouring all of it into my own FFs? XD

I hope all went well with your exam! :)

[silberstreif]

Really. ^^

I've noticed that the length of my reviews has more to do with time than emotional impact. ^^" And if I care about the story and/or the author.
But one's own FFs can really shift the focus to, well, the own writing and nothing else. At least with me it's like that.

I will know tonight, what the grades are.

[neverminetohold]

It's not a time thing, in my case. I have usually enough, or can squeeze in a bit of me-time, which is often invested into Internet stuff.

Oho! Und? Wie ist es gelaufen?

[silberstreif]

Somehow I always find myself with other things I should do, than internet stuff. :)

Mmh, durchwachsen. Einige überraschend gut, und eine note deutlich schlechter als erhofft. Insgesamt okay. :)