The Torchwood - 1/10

[sierasky]

This fic takes place post-KKBB, but before the infamous first date.

Comments

[crazytook]

good start. too short for me to really say anything else other than i look forward to the next chapter, and to nicely ask you not to make the villains 2 dimensional. too many ianto gets kidnapped fics have the villains be EVIL, and im a little tired of it. so im asking in advance.

good luck with the future chapters, i eagerly await them.

kudos!
crazytook

[sierasky]

I completely agree with you about the massive amount of kidnapped-Ianto fics. I promise to make the characters (especially the baddies) as three dimension as possible!

[christine_twfan]

Love the start of this story. Look forward to the next part. :)

[hab318princess]

love the idea, looking forward to more

It should be uncaffeinated for Owen on the instant coffee

and on a personal note: don't hurt Ianto, please!

[ifeelsodirty]

So short but I'm hooked already, especially by the last line.

[thrace_adams]

So short but it's got me hooked :)Love that last line :)