Something I'm suprized I didn't add before
I guess that it must not have occurred to me right away.
before I get to that, I suppose there's something I should add.
I've been afraid to read Naruto.
Yes, it's true. Ever since (what I imagine to be) sometime before Hallowe'en, but if asked I could find out the specifics, I have stopped reading the chapters. This is based largely and simply, upon the fact that a) I don't want to ruin my fanfictiony-dreams (but more on that later) and b) I don't want Jaraiya to die D: (and yes, I have had somebody ruin that for me...). Despite all this, besides that one boy, I am still what could be considered in the group, the highest Naruto authority. I just last week was told I'd put "way more thought into it" than them, and in the best have been called a hmm... something akin to 'Naruto Prophet/Guru', and I have still managed to read more, and get further than everyone else (they have, some of them, seen Shippuuden, unlike myself who hasn't bothered with it). Now then, for where the fear comes in... the Renengan (or whatever, still haven't seen it enough to know how to spell it) the founder of the three main doujutsu, has completely thrown off my own created dojutsu (which is in my opinion good, because it doesn't go too over the top) and just now I've had a thought about that one kid from the fillers who could basically see everything! and I could totally see him going 'I see dead people...' Now then, they mentioned three different dojutsu, so I'm like, "oh no!" because if there's only three, then how can you factor in any new ones, when you already have Sharingan and Byakugan?!?! D:
So, my mind wanders to the possibilities. I originally had a long-winded speach about points in favour of possible new doujutsu, and counterpoints as well, but that has sort of petered out in the previous months. However, I shall take a stab at it.
"The Three Great Eye-Techniques", they never actually specify which (yet, this is part of why I stopped) so they could potentially be the Rin'negan (obviously), perhaps the Byakugan and some other unknown. Now then, this comes from that supposedly Sharingan comes from Byakugan (and really, in all fairness, why would any region have all the doujutsu?) So, if this is the case, my created dojutsu would be lesser (though I don't want it to be :<) but another thought is... maybe not even the Byakugan is one of them? >:3 If this is the case, then we're cooking with gas. Okay, since I honestly don't believe I have it in me to properly rant anymore, I shall just say this... I'm going to suck it in a read it. It's not so bad, until they're specific, my plans are not changed all too drastically :} No need to be laizzes-faire about this, just write the darn thing, and keep your fantasies to yourself. :P
Dude... I suck at rants XD
Now then, as for what the story could do... he could develop Sakura more, maybe give her a tragic backstory :P [I find my conceptions and ideas on fanfiction constantly changing as I read the story, The Fanfiction, she is very adaptable] Or maybe develop other characters. Like Tenten. Yes, Tenten. She doesn't just need a backstory, she needs a story! Or at least a family name or something...
(Zee fontcolour, she hurts zee eyes, yes?)
{{{ o.o 'The Rin'negan does not exist...' }}} {{{'October fourth, ruined my life D:'}}}
**take any typos as they are***