Comments | sidlj: First line/last line meme stolen from <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/paian">paian</a></strong>

sidlj

First line/last line meme stolen from paian

May 11, 2007 15:25

Behind the LJ cut are the first lines of some of my stories. Possibly some last lines too if I can find some I like. If you're up to it, take a line and write a story/drabble using it as the first (or last) line. Whatever works.

And I thought I would add: Feel free to comment anonymously if that makes you more comfortable for any reason. :-)

John ( Read more... )

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bugchicklv May 11 2007, 20:58:47 UTC

*blink*

You're challenging **US** to take YOUR stuff and run with it?

Can I make it other pairings than the one you originally wrote it for? (that is, of course, assuming that I will try one. Cause, you know...it's a bit daunting--what with you being YOU and all.)

sidlj May 11 2007, 22:02:49 UTC

Well, as long as only one name is mentioned in the prompt, the other half of the equation is up to you. Do I sense some Dan/Cam on the horizon? :-)

bugchicklv May 12 2007, 00:53:26 UTC

LOL! You know me too well!

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Re: When Daniel woke up ... (ADULT) sidlj May 11 2007, 22:09:39 UTC

Oh, fantastic!

Jack's watch lay twined with his and tangled with his glasses on the nightstand Even the inanimate objects are getting intimate with each other!

Heaven sure smells like a waffle house *giggle* Awww!

Sorry we missed the sex - sounds like it was damn good. ;-)

Re: When Daniel woke up ... (ADULT) starglyph May 12 2007, 02:09:31 UTC

He let out a low groan as the memory of orgasm went through him so intensely that his groin throbbed and he felt like he'd come again, right now, just from lying in Jack's bed and remembering what had happened in it.

You can always pack so much *guh* into one sentence, it just astounds me.

And the watches and glasses? Accessory porn! :)

Re: When Daniel woke up ... (ADULT) niamaea May 12 2007, 02:57:43 UTC

He let out a low groan as the memory of orgasm went through him so intensely that his groin throbbed and he felt like he'd come again, right now, just from lying in Jack's bed and remembering what had happened in it.

Wow. So apparently the smokin' hot one line sex scene can be done!

So sweet. Aww!

Between a couple of those first lines... starglyph May 11 2007, 21:34:53 UTC

"This is boring," Jack grumbled.

Daniel slid his eyes away from the Aztec temple displayed on the small TV screen on the dresser, to glance at Jack beside him, where he was propped up on the pillows and crossing his arms. “You got to choose the last two nights,” Daniel reminded him, turning his gaze back to the show. “And you’re the one who wanted to watch it in bed.”

“You were supposed to fall asleep so I could stealthily slip the remote out of your hand,” Jack explained, waving a finger toward Daniel’s hand and realizing it was empty. His tone was both accusing and petulant as he said, “You hid the remote ( ... )

Re: Between a couple of those first lines... advection May 11 2007, 21:41:12 UTC

Wo, major points for first and last line! ::bows to da mastah::

Plus, it's sexy and adorable.

Re: Between a couple of those first lines... starglyph May 12 2007, 02:15:07 UTC

Heh. After so many five things lists, I think I'm just in the habit of doing stuff just a little bit different.

Thank you!

Re: Between a couple of those first lines... sidlj May 11 2007, 22:15:54 UTC

Ooh! Who cares about a silly old temple!

Love the bit about the remote, lol.

PLUS, you get a gold star for initiative. :-D

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Re: Too Many XOvers by delpia via Sid sidlj May 11 2007, 22:12:29 UTC

I'm dying of laughter here.

You are evil.

And this is SO funny.

I just hope they're not all in Atlantis, because the beds are too small there. ;-)

Re: Too Many XOvers by delpia via Sid advection May 11 2007, 22:47:36 UTC

lol! ::applauds::

Re: Too Many XOvers by delpia via Sid green_grrl May 12 2007, 02:29:08 UTC

*sporfle* That's an OT4 I can get behind!

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This meme brings the silly! niamaea May 12 2007, 02:51:12 UTC

"This is boring," Jack grumbled. Daniel ignored him, didn’t even bat an eye, and Jack reached for the notepad he’d stashed in his pocket, leaned in until their shoulders brushed, close enough that he could murmur beneath the sing-song chat of the high priest. “Do you want Xs or Os?”

“This holiday is equivalent in importance to Easter or Yom Kippur, now sit up and look interested.”

“That so?” Jack said. “Cause it’s mostly seemed like four hours of bell ringing and the shakey dance, to me.”

Daniel cast him a sidelong glance (and Jack was counting that as a win - made him look) and then turned back, mouth tight around whatever it was he decided not to say. “Yes, Jack, I’ve been sitting here the whole time.”

“Oh, look, I was wrong. Four and a half.”

“We were honored to be invited.”

“Half of their people are sleeping,” Jack said. In the center of the room, the priest had taken up his hand bells again and was shimmying around erratically, jingling and jangling with every step. “Look, that girl’s doing her laundry ( ... )

This meme brings the happy :-) advection May 12 2007, 03:10:55 UTC

This is adorable!

Re: This meme brings the happy :-) niamaea May 12 2007, 20:18:41 UTC

Thank you! :)

Re: This meme brings the silly! sidlj May 12 2007, 03:33:58 UTC

LOL at Sam and the sock-darner and Daniel caving!

Hey, Macarena! *shimmies*

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