Re: Noncon, humilated, terrified Holmes!rat_chanDecember 29 2011, 20:46:08 UTC
Well, you might be in luck. We seem to share a number of kinks (mirrors) and this prompt is right up my alley.
It'll probably be the balcony scene, as 1- I might do other things w/ the hook scene and 2- my anal-retentive, plot-hole despising brain can think of a reason for a mirror to be there (ladies & gentlemen may wish to fix wind & mist damage to their appearance before returning inside? ... well, it makes more sense to me than a mirror in a weapons factory).
Just a few questions: -when you say brutal, how brutal do you want it? Like, zero lube brutal? Harris!Moriarty deliciously balances the savage and the refined (almost dancing w/ Holmes on that hook), but I think it could be more humiliating if Moriarty forces Holmes to enjoy parts of it.
-Do you want Holmes to be afraid of sex on a phobia level (done that before, not sure I want to again), or more just a fear of the unknown and a disgust for sex magnified by shame and a near phobic loathing of being so helpless/powerless?
I'll try to get started today, but I'm slow and easily distracted (from writing at least... these days) so...
Re: Noncon, humilated, terrified Holmes!rat_chanDecember 29 2011, 21:26:46 UTC
Concerning the question as to how brutal-- I want whatever's the realistic and what you think would be in-character. Whatever you feel Moriarty's character would do (because this character is new to me, so I think others would know better than myself on how to write him).
Question 2: No, I don't want it to be a phobia. Like you said, just the fear of the unknown since he's never done it and never even really thought about it before because he has no interest in sex whatsoever. It's more about not knowing what will happen and at the same time knowing _exactly_ what will happen, on top of the fact that he's completely overpowered and helpless (which he absolutely hates more than anything). So the second one of what you said. LOL Sorry, I should've explained it better but I bascially didn't know how. Thanks for considering this and I hope you find the time to do it!
Re: Noncon, humilated, terrified Holmes!rat_chanJanuary 2 2012, 01:36:39 UTC
Mmkay. Not finished yet, but I hope to have it up tomorrow at the latest.
There are just a couple of details I hope you or someone else tracking this thread can clarify for me:
-(this is the most important) Holmes was injured in the leg, too, right? I mean, I didn't imagine the scene in the box car where Watson was stitching or getting ready to stitch Holmes' leg?
-(this one & the next are not important, but I'll kick myself later if they prove inaccurate) What were Moriarty's exact words when he drapes the fur rug over Holmes' shoulders in the balcony scene?
-The chess table on the balcony: was it wood or metal?
Thanks for the heads up! That, along with a photo on IMDB and a clip on YouTube, helped me out a great deal!
I had to go back and edit a few things (more than once... Can't have Holmes gagged with his own bow tie if he's not bloody wearing it!! And I can't believe I forgot the gloves!) and then there were more interruptions (family) and distractions (the family TV) than I anticipated.
Sorry for keeping you and the OP waiting!!!! Check below!
It'll probably be the balcony scene, as 1- I might do other things w/ the hook scene and 2- my anal-retentive, plot-hole despising brain can think of a reason for a mirror to be there (ladies & gentlemen may wish to fix wind & mist damage to their appearance before returning inside? ... well, it makes more sense to me than a mirror in a weapons factory).
Just a few questions:
-when you say brutal, how brutal do you want it? Like, zero lube brutal? Harris!Moriarty deliciously balances the savage and the refined (almost dancing w/ Holmes on that hook), but I think it could be more humiliating if Moriarty forces Holmes to enjoy parts of it.
-Do you want Holmes to be afraid of sex on a phobia level (done that before, not sure I want to again), or more just a fear of the unknown and a disgust for sex magnified by shame and a near phobic loathing of being so helpless/powerless?
I'll try to get started today, but I'm slow and easily distracted (from writing at least... these days) so...
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Question 2: No, I don't want it to be a phobia. Like you said, just the fear of the unknown since he's never done it and never even really thought about it before because he has no interest in sex whatsoever. It's more about not knowing what will happen and at the same time knowing _exactly_ what will happen, on top of the fact that he's completely overpowered and helpless (which he absolutely hates more than anything). So the second one of what you said. LOL Sorry, I should've explained it better but I bascially didn't know how. Thanks for considering this and I hope you find the time to do it!
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There are just a couple of details I hope you or someone else tracking this thread can clarify for me:
-(this is the most important) Holmes was injured in the leg, too, right? I mean, I didn't imagine the scene in the box car where Watson was stitching or getting ready to stitch Holmes' leg?
-(this one & the next are not important, but I'll kick myself later if they prove inaccurate) What were Moriarty's exact words when he drapes the fur rug over Holmes' shoulders in the balcony scene?
-The chess table on the balcony: was it wood or metal?
Thanks, and hang in there a bit longer!
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- "Here we are. Don't want you to catch cold."
- wood
*squirms impatiently and waits for fic* ;)
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I had to go back and edit a few things (more than once... Can't have Holmes gagged with his own bow tie if he's not bloody wearing it!! And I can't believe I forgot the gloves!) and then there were more interruptions (family) and distractions (the family TV) than I anticipated.
Sorry for keeping you and the OP waiting!!!!
Check below!
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*handcuffs self to computer and waits for fill*
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I hope those are comfy fuzzy cuffs... I've only managed 3 paragraphs so far and I'm going to Disneyland tomorrow!
>.<
Screw you plot exposition! I'm barely including you here (barely need you here) and still you torment me, making beginning so difficult.
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I HAVE SO MANY FEELS RIGHT NOW.
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