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[shineesosexxiii]

Title: Ducky Umbrellas (2/2)
Author SHINeeSoSexxiii
Rating: G
Pairing/Focus: OnKey
Summary: Part two of clicky!

“No. I just came down here to give you an umbrella.”Jinki was sitting on the sofa of his small apartment when his doorbell rang. He opened the door with a simple thought, ‘Who would be visiting me?’ He walked to the door slowly, holding

Comments

[mistery_guy31]

what a coincident or is he planned it before??
well whatever..
this is cool..
but just wandering did kibum came to jiki house at midnight??coz he was holding a bat when he went to open the door..
sory im quite slow..
hehehe..^^

[volatileflame]

*gasp* ~ you can't leave me hanging! i want moar!

[shineesosexxiii]

*gasp* people like my fics. lol. Maybe, I'll write a follow up story.=D

[rinni1905]

No dear, you're not fail at this at all, believe me. It is cute and good, I love how you use short sentences and dialogues to portray all their feeling. You did well, don't worry, but there're still rooms for improvement, right?

Aw, 3:33 and I love you are very cute, finally, Onew made up his mind and be with Kibum. They were too shy, seriously, but that also makes them adorable. I hope I can read more fic from you :).

[shineesosexxiii]

:) Thank you for reading. <3~~

[choon_hee]

cute cuteee
omoo dongsae you and you're fluff ideaaa
me like iiit