Kaleidoscope news -- Two revisions and a teaser

Aug 17, 2013 15:10

I actually finished posting the revised chapters of the first part of Kaleidoscope at FF.N a couple of weeks ago, but what with Pottermore and Fire and Hemlock and the R/T drabble/drawble meme, I hadn't managed to get the revisions archived here on LJ as well. They're posted now, backdated to keep them near the rest of the chapters (and to avoid ( Read more... )

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shimotsuki August 28 2013, 03:37:08 UTC
I had a brain break from looking at maps of the north of Scotland - why can't people be more specific and helpful in bios? ;)

That sounds intriguing! Is this for a writing project?

I have fond memories of Catching Hold, because I feel as if I know Remus's Devon 'sanctuary'

Ah, that would be because (speaking of looking at maps!) I have you to thank for figuring out where Remus's little hidden cove should be in the first place. (*scurries off to add that to author's note on FFN*)

The edits and expansions have given it more of emotional punch,

I'm really glad you think so. :)

especially how Remus ties himself and Tonks up in impossible knots, by trying to retain a platonic friendship that no longer exists. Yes, that's going to go really well!

*snort* I'm already suffering the consequences as I try to write their very next conversation, and it's turning out to be very tricky. But that's obviously all Remus's fault, so I'll just blame him.

Seriously, it was so nice of you to slog your way through Kaleidoscope a second time, and thanks for the encouraging comments on the revisions. ♥

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