Kyuubi bunny #2

[shewhoflies]

 Kyuubi bunny #2 came about after reading yet another "nice"!Kyuubi fic. Y'know, there's a lot of fanfic where Kyuubi is Naruto's ally. It's not unusual for Kyuubi to be depicted as a female, who can use a human form, and who may become a romantic interest for Naruto. She may not always be actually nice, but she's certainly not evil. She has a "

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[wingwyrm]

... you are killing me. Honestly. Now I want to write Kyuubi like this, taking a redheaded female form and teaching Naruto all the things a mother teaches their child XD I always read bad fic too, and I'm always telling myself that I'll never write a cognizant Kyuubi because Kyuubi is a chakra demon and so on and so forth.

But, you know, I firmly told myself that I'd never do a fem!Naruto either. *snorts* Look how well that one turned out for me LOL

(can you believe that I haven't friended you on here yet? I can't! I thought I had, but then LJ said that I was only viewing your page, and not a mutual friend or even that I'd friended you yet XD I have friended you now!)

[shewhoflies]

...Hee. Thank you! You have no idea how much I'm smiling right now. If you really do want to write this, and you actually find the time and energy, then please! After all, if this one ends up half as shiny your fem!Naruto fic it'd already be over twice the shiny I'd imagined it to be. :-D

Ah, badfic. It hurts us so, but we can't seem to stop.

Meanwhile, did the bunny spark any ideas in your head you'd be willing to share? *curious*

Eeeeh? Thank you for friending me! Silly me, I follow you everywhere and then forget to add you on LJ. >.

[wingwyrm]

:D I have half a mind to do a smart!Naruto with this. As Kyuubi would teach him how to learn and how to concentrate and chakra control... He'd be reading at the age of three or four and learning techniques around six. He'd be crap at taijutsu because he's too small to really learn anything but for speed and 'dirty' tricks (ex: kicking balls, biting with sharp teeth and so on). He'd probably never meet the Rookie Nine, having gone into the Academy years earlier then them, and graduating about seven or eight. (Of course he'd meet them later, during chuunin exams or something

[shewhoflies]

!!! ♥♥♥♥♥

This is so awesome. I'd so totally love to read this fic. Sure, it does sound like it has the potential to turn into bad!fic, but that usually depends on how it's written, doesn't it? And. Besides. Even if it did veer in that direction. It would be ridiculously entertaining bad!fic.

Hmmm. I think maybe Sasuke would develop a very complicated one-sided relationship with Naruto. After all, he's trying to surpass Itachi, and here is a boy who, in a way, did surpass Itachi.

Also, wouldn't Sarutobi want to encourage Naruto in "making friends" his own age? To provide some stability and companionship, and also, because the Rookies are future leader and clan heads and will most likely have to work with Naruto anyway, so it would be better if their cordial relationship got an early start... ah, I dunno.

You do such a good job plotting I'm tempted to simply sit at your feet and ask for more. XD

Part One

[wingwyrm]

Ha. I just... can't stop myself. I have no self control XD

Part Two

[wingwyrm]

"And green? Are there hills, Naruto-chan? Or flowers

Part Three

[wingwyrm]

"So because both you and your father talk about the same person that way, using different forms of address, you've theorized that Naruto is married? Just because he calls Hisa, Hisa-chan?"

"Are we wrong?" Chouji asked, popping a bit of meat into his mouth and licking his fingers.

Asuma would have liked to have told his genin (and chuunin, as Shikamaru couldn't be grouped that way anymore) who Hisa actually way, but it was still an S class secret. So he shrugged and didn't deny anything. Let the rumours of Naruto being married get up to his old man. His father needed a little disinformation to shake things up in the office anyway. "I actually couldn't tell you one way or another about Naruto and Hisa. The Uzumaki's relationship is very private and I don't know them well enough to infringe on their lives." Ha. Take that, Old Man, Asuma thought to himself. Since 'Hisa' was housed inside the Uzumaki, 'she' had just as much claim on the Uzumaki name as Naruto did.

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LOLOLOL

Re: Part Three

[shewhoflies]

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I love this beginning. What are you talking about, it's not bad!fic at allThis may just be my favorite let's-change-the-mindscape scene yet. And I did so enjoy reading your Kyuubi. I really liked the way Hisa spoke of Kushina, and the way she chose to cherish Naruto. The scenes were short, but they give a glimpse into a lovely relationship

Re: Part Three

[wingwyrm]

Hee! Okay, so I was a little worried that you would think it was bad!fic, because it doesn't really feel up to standards for me XD

Re: Part Three

[shewhoflies]

*___* Your thoughts on how the mindscape works make so much sense! Really, the only other times I read something that makes this much sense claimed that The Sewer isn't Naruto's mindscape at all and instead just Kyuubi's prison. (To be completely honest, the first time I saw The Sewer my reaction was ahhh, stomach = sewer, very funny Mr. Author.)

But yeah, I like your idea of how mindscape shaping works much, much better.

*headdesk* Sorry! You wrote the others all see this tokubetsu jounin and think that he's too smart and [he]wouldn't want to be friends anyway, but I read the others all see this tokubetsu jounin and think that he's too smart and [they]wouldn't want to be friends anyway. Sometimes I'm slow like that. -__-

Yeah, suddenly this world is much less dark.

And now that I know Asuma doesn't dislike Naruto, the whole thing seems much funnier and not even a little malicious. What threw me was the "san" and Asuma would have liked to have told his genin (...) who Hisa actually way, but it was still an S class secret. It made