OP- Your Awesome Removed My Cloak of Anondelicateflower8December 6 2010, 17:30:38 UTC
8D OH MY- FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF <3!!!!!!!!! I am incoherent with utter GLEE at the awesome this contains! <3 I can already see what you've done here! You've explained Mummy, and Mycroft (and of COURSE Mycroft's the over-protective you-can't-leave-the-tower-EVER-you're-mine person) and John's voice is PERFECT!!!!
-but you’ve probably figured out by now that this story isn’t about me at all. Sad, I know. This story is about Sherlock. It’s always about Sherlock.
BEST. LINE. EVER!!!! Oh, wow! I can't wait to see who the other characters are, and what new characters you add! Maybe Maximus is Molly or Lestrade? And are you planning on including Moriarty? Maybe he's the two big burly guys John works with? Maybe he's John's secret employer? Is John going to have a secret/fake name, like Flynn was Eugene? Are all of the people at the bar the Scotland Yarders? (You don't have to reply to this, these are just all of the questions running through my head. They will be answered with time as you write. ^_^)
Anyway, long review basically saying: OMG, much love! Please write more soon! I love you! You did so well! Looking forward to more!!! <3
Re: OP- Your Awesome Removed My Cloak of AnonmitsuruakiDecember 6 2010, 19:39:34 UTC
I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKE THIS! IN JOHN'S VOICE! It took me 4 hours (which is actually pretty fast for me) mainly because I was going 'OMG, WHAT DO THEY COVER IN THE INTRO IN TANGLED THAT I SHOULD PROBABLY COVER HERE??' and I'm a bit iffy when it comes to writing first person, but I couldn't think of a better way to do it. Ah well. The rest will be in third person, but that's probably not a surprise to anyone.
And it is always about Sherlock. ;D
I'll post the first part here too, but I don't know when you'll get more after that because I have finals this week. And I am off to see Tangled again in a few minutes. However, Sherlock's a bit fail at being Rapunzel-y. He's really just himself with really long hair that can do nifty things. On the upside, he has no phone, is book smart, and his hands-on knowledge of anything is pretty much nil. John will have his hands full. XD
-but you’ve probably figured out by now that this story isn’t about me at all. Sad, I know.
This story is about Sherlock. It’s always about Sherlock.
BEST. LINE. EVER!!!! Oh, wow! I can't wait to see who the other characters are, and what new characters you add! Maybe Maximus is Molly or Lestrade? And are you planning on including Moriarty? Maybe he's the two big burly guys John works with? Maybe he's John's secret employer? Is John going to have a secret/fake name, like Flynn was Eugene? Are all of the people at the bar the Scotland Yarders? (You don't have to reply to this, these are just all of the questions running through my head. They will be answered with time as you write. ^_^)
Anyway, long review basically saying: OMG, much love! Please write more soon! I love you! You did so well! Looking forward to more!!! <3
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And it is always about Sherlock. ;D
I'll post the first part here too, but I don't know when you'll get more after that because I have finals this week. And I am off to see Tangled again in a few minutes. However, Sherlock's a bit fail at being Rapunzel-y. He's really just himself with really long hair that can do nifty things. On the upside, he has no phone, is book smart, and his hands-on knowledge of anything is pretty much nil. John will have his hands full. XD
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