Prompting Part XXXII

Nov 02, 2012 18:01

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Fill: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, 15/15 anonymous December 17 2012, 17:10:52 UTC
In the corner of the hospital room, Mycroft Holmes angled his phone just so, took a digital photo, and sent it on its circuitous and encrypted way. The number to which he forwarded the picture would be changed within the next thirty-six hours; the recipient it represented was identified only by the title "Unknown Caller" in Mycroft's list of contacts.

The picture he'd taken revealed two men. Ordinary. Dull. Altogether remarkable.

The one reclined in the bed was grey-faced and silver-haired and attached to an alarming number of tubes and wires, but he was breathing on his own, finally in recovery after the last of a marathon of surgeries. The other man curled in a chair by his side, head tilted back and mouth hanging open in exhausted sleep.

The photo offered proof of life.

Vulnerable life, currently in Mycroft's charge.

The mobile vibrated in Mycroft's hand. The text read, "The room is secure?"

Mycroft typed, "My own handpicked guards stand watch. Only MH, MrsH & a few of my staff know who is here. When he can be moved safely, they'll both be taken to one of my secure locations."

Lestrade made a soft sound of complaint and frowned in what was obviously less-than-comfortable slumber, shifted a heavily-bandaged hand, and then sighed as he descended back into drugged oblivion.

Another text followed: "I will send the Carlsons a message."

"I was under the impression I already had," Mycroft replied.

"It's worth repeating," came the response.

John's head rocked slightly and found another position. The fingers on his left hand flexed open and then closed into a fist. His snores became snuffles.

"The more names you add to your list, the longer you delay your return," Mycroft noted in his next text. "I will handle this." He couldn't resist adding, "It's not always about you."

The reply was abrupt: "Yes it is."

Attached to this text was a grainy picture obviously taken from a distance as daylight surrendered to dusk. Mycroft narrowed his eyes. The older of the two men on the hotel balcony, stocky and florid-faced and cradling a bottle between meaty hands, was Jay Carlson, the patriarch of the Carlson clan.

The slim man who leaned against the railing at his side was at least a generation younger, with a mild, boyish face that easily could have shifted from bland to quite fetching, given the right context. His slight smile in the photo, however, was as unsettling as his dark eyes were cold. Sebastian Moran.

"I see," Mycroft typed, after a moment's pause at the revelation. "Do as you will. You always do. But be careful."

"You should worry about L & J. I'm holding you responsible for their safety."

Mycroft glanced up at the two men. They held rare distinctions, these empty-handed refugees from the natural disaster known as Jim Moriarty, whether they knew it or not. They had Sherlock's concern, and they had Mycroft's trust.

Of course, they had paid for both. Dearly and repeatedly.

Mycroft's word, in this case at least, was his bond. He texted, "I will."

And he would. Constantly.

They were, after all, his allies.

THE END

Tremendous thanks to all of you who've read this!

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OP offers <3 <3 <3 anonymous December 17 2012, 21:17:32 UTC
Thank you, thank you, Anon!

This is all I could've hoped for and more. Here at the end, I especially love the contrast between the awkward and understated alliance in the scene between Mycroft and John and the cool, practical "I'll send them a message" interaction between Mycroft and Sherlock (I mean, these are the good guys, and they're talking about eliminating people, and it's perfectly IC). Protective!Mycroft is as awesome as cold-blooded!Mycroft, and the balance here is just right. His concern and John's for the awesome Lestrade, who's so alone, is the best. I love this! THANK YOU.

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Anon here anonymous December 18 2012, 12:25:45 UTC
I'm so happy (and so relieved!) that this worked for you. Thank you very much for the lovely feedback. I'm particularly pleased that the balance between the "c" in h/c and the threat (not only from the baddies, but also from the Holmes brothers) worked for you.

This was so much fun to write. I'm grateful for the awesome prompt. :D

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Re: Fill: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, 15/15 catko December 18 2012, 09:57:47 UTC
Fantastic story, excellent action, and seeing these three in this situation is unusual and well done.

I totally did not expect it to end with Sherlock. That was an awesome twist.

I kind of hanker to see their household set up after this. :)

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Anon here anonymous December 18 2012, 12:32:38 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked this. And it's great to hear that you didn't see the bit with Sherlock coming at the end. That makes my day.

I kind of hanker to see their household set up after this. :)

Oh gosh: stubbornrecovery!Lestrade, medicalBAMF!John, and scaryprotective!Mycroft. I can only imagine. That's quite a potent combination! :)

I'm really grateful for your kind words. Thanks again for reading!

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Re: Anon here catko December 19 2012, 07:10:14 UTC
P R O M P T ! !

And fussyworriedfrustrated!Sherlock, trying to caretake and scold from afar.

That would be a great story. *thinks about it*

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Re: Fill: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, 15/15 anonymous December 18 2012, 10:28:22 UTC
Thank you for a lovely story!

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Anon here anonymous December 18 2012, 12:34:05 UTC
Oh, thank you for reading it! I'm so happy you liked it. Thanks for the lovely comment.

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Re: Fill: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, 15/15 anonymous December 20 2012, 17:19:20 UTC
Eeeeeeeeee! *flails* Sherlock, and Moran, and Mycroft - his trust and his word, and "constantly" and and and....

(Honestly, I've reread this section three times, and still can't manage a coherent response. I've enjoyed this story so much! Like the other anon, I'd love to see more, if you ever feel like writing it.)

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Anon here anonymous December 20 2012, 20:09:52 UTC
Oh, you've made my day, dear Anon! *flails back*

I'm really tickled that you liked Mycroft, in particular, as well as the facts that Sherlock was watching and Moran was involved.

It's fantastic to hear there's interest in more. I'm most grateful for your encouragement!

Thanks again for reading and for your lovely comments. :D

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Re: Fill: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, 15/15 anonymous December 23 2012, 21:31:35 UTC
Wow, excellent fill! I love it.

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Anon here anonymous December 24 2012, 02:01:06 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked it. I really appreciate your reading and commenting. :D

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Revised and Expanded "Everything You Know I Haven't Got" morganstuart January 5 2013, 13:21:08 UTC
The much-revised and much-expanded version of this is now completed and available here:
Part 1; Part 2; Part 3; Part 4 + Epilogue

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Re: Revised and Expanded "Everything You Know I Haven't Got" chizu_sando January 30 2013, 17:16:19 UTC
Holy Crap this was amazing! Your characterization was spot on and the intrigue! *fans self* Unfortunately this post will be far too short to convey my admiration. I simply do not possess the words. I will, as others have posted, have to hunt down and read every fic you've written. Am I a terrible person for saying I wanted more of the boot scene with John being a BAFM!doctor?

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Re: Revised and Expanded "Everything You Know I Haven't Got" morganstuart January 30 2013, 21:38:16 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for this! I'm absolutely delighted that the characterisations seemed right and that you liked the intrigue here. You've made my day! I appreciate your kind words more than I can say.

I adore BAMF!doctor John (and stoic!patient Lestrade, for that matter). It put a huge grin on my face to hear you liked that part in particular and wanted more.

If you read any of my other stories on my LJ, I do hope you enjoy them. Thanks again for your encouragement and kindness.

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