Fic: More Than Words

[she_burns1]

Title: More Than Words
Author: she_burns1
Pairing: Bret/Jemaine, references to Bret/Coco
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jemaine and Bret run into someone at a birthday party.
Disclaimer: I do not owns the ‘Flight of the Conchords’ or anything connected with them.
Spoilers: After ‘The Third Conchord’.
Prompt: un_love_you #20 - I hate you, you bitch.
Notes: This fic is

Comments

[lordstarfish]

LOL at them in the closet! Actually, I didn't even think about it until you mentioned it, haha. & AW closet monsters :D I think you did the 'I hate you' part justice, since it propelled the first part of the story... Anyway, I loved it! Your other stuff is coming soon, I get a day off tomorrow to read & write & edit all I want to :3

[she_burns1]

I didn't notice the closet thing either at first but once I did I figured I'd better mention it before I got serious eye rolls.

Yeah, this fic would have been 100% better if I had had a chance to run it by you first, but I wanted to get it out on her BD.

I'll probably be sending you all my un_love_you's as they get completed - I know I've gotten about 2 done since the last bit I sent you. Hope you don't mind me cramming your e-mail with them!!

[lordstarfish]

I thought it was fine! & of course I don't mind, I'm just sorry I always take so long! D:

[she_burns1]

You take as long as you like - I'm in no rush!

[ballroombubble]

Out of the closet and into the elevator - that's quick work!

I loved this, of course. Sweet and lovely, and the kissing was very hot <3

[she_burns1]

Sweet, lovely, hot...

Oh ho, are you describing the kissing or yourself? *wink, wink*

I tried to work in one of your sentences, by the by, but couldn't seem to get one to fit...hopefully I'll get one in the next fic! ;-)

[beansidhe_baby]

I LOVE YOU DESPERATELY AND WANTONLY FOR THIS!!! *ahem* itwassogoodInearlyweedabit

First off, OMG I get a party at Dave's house (I'm his Irish friend right, right?) and I get Bret/Jemaine kissage! Best birthday evar!

[she_burns1]

hee hee - I wondered if you noticed I slipped you in there. I usually don't do that sort of thing because it is SO fannish, but I figured, why not?

I am really glad you liked it as I was eagerly awaiting your response...not like I was checking my LJ every 5 seconds or something (lol) though, seriously, I need a life!

I hope your birthday was super wonderful!!! XDD

[beansidhe_baby]

I wanted to reply earlier but my damn internet was being weird. Sorry for the wait!

lol If I was at that party I probably would have quickly propelled Mel and Dave towards the bedroom with half an eye on the closet to make sure I didn't miss anything ;P

[freckled_kisses]

Ah yay, I was hoping you were the one he was throwing the party for. Happy Birthday :D

[xxsmoothopexx]

I didn't notice the 'in the closet' bit until you mentioned it. xD
I liked it though!

Happy belated birthday to her!

[athelasleaf]

Haha, pretty funny how the one that I commented would be hard to write was the first one you tackled. Girl likes a challenge, eh

[athelasleaf]

Also, I don't know why that comment is indented - it was meant to be a general reply. Silly LJ.

[she_burns1]

EPIC REPLY - ENGAGE

[playthefool]

I love the idea of boys being stuck in small places WINK WINK. Great fic!