Keeping Sammy in the Dark

[shangrilada]

Title: Keeping Sammy in the Dark
Summary: Sam and his Stanford friends in a cabin. Add a hurricane, a power outage, an asthma attack, and Dean. And then add alcohol. You should have stopped before the alcohol. 
Warnings/Spoilers: Language.
Wordcount: 5,802
Author's Note: Sammy-verse. I don't even know with this one, guys. Tell me what you think.

Comments

[27_jaredjensen]

hahaha Idaho. This was all kinds of brilliant. I was just smiling like an idiot the entire time I was reading. Man-Jess, that was kind of genius and made me giggle:) And your Dean voice is PERFECTION. And SNWHEEZING, omg. Love ♥ Also also marco polo with Sam’s sneezes!! I was all, one or both of those, that’s the cute sneezing part she was talking about. And the part where Josh is kissing Sam, and thinking about the way Sam tastes, sooooo good. I love how the power went out and it was dark the whole time, but I could still picture in my head what was happening, and it made the things like Sam’s wheezing and touch and the sound of the rain all so much better. I always feel like, so satisfied when I read these. And wow, this comment is all over the place because I think it’s bedtime now:) But in conclusion, I LOVED IT. SO SO SO MUCH.

[shangrilada]

YAY!! <3 <3 and yep, those were the two parts I had in mind. I've had the Marco Polo thing in like five failed fics and I was like I'M USING THIS DAMN IT.

[clex_monkie89]

I'm making FLAILY HANDS AGAIN. ALL OVER.

I love that Dean makes himself leave Sam's side because they're both drunk and he doesn't trust himself. I love that he drove into a fucking hurricane for Sam. I love Josh and his thing for Sam and his odd little jealousy/dislike of Dean. I love that Dean freaks out when he can't hear Sam wheeze and that Sam put Dean's head on his chest so he could hear it over the storm.

I just. I liked this so much. I'm sure you are completely shocked by this.

AND SNWHEEZING AND MARCO POLO WITH THE SNEEZES. I totally remembered those when I saw the above comment.

[shangrilada]

EEE! So so so so glad you liked it.

[ramona1026]

"Man-Jess" made me laugh out loud :) Your Dean voice, as always, is spot on and in character. I don't usually like outsider pov very much, but the parts from Josh's pov were interesting and engaging. I though the part when Josh thinks the boys don't get along was funny, especially with them being best friends forever in your verse. I loved this, but I love everything you write lol. Your stories make me feel warm, content and happy, with just the right amount of angst to make it feel realistic. Thank you for that :)

[shangrilada]

thank YOU.

[callistosh65]

“They feel pink to you?”

“Uh...”

“I'm just fucking with you. Do you speak? Did I grab the quiet one by accident?” There's just something about your Dean that makes me adore him so damn much. And I love all the tension you played with here via the alcohol, it worked like a charm.

[shangrilada]

oh my god, THANK YOU, so great to hear it worked for you.

[coldneedles]

I'm behind because I haven't commented on your last two (totally read them, just not strung words together), but I just had to comment on this and all the things I loved

[shangrilada]

Oh, wow. Thank you so much. Thank you thank you thank you thank you.

I imagine John was really great with little kid sick Sam, because that was before Sam got all combative and complicated, and I also think John probably blames the fire for Sam's asthma in the first place (something I keep trying to work in to fics that keeps getting cut) so there's guilt and sadness there and just really epic sympathy for the kid.