Under Advisement [Chapter 4]

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Title: Under Advisement (Chapter 4)
Pairing(s)/Characters: Friendship! JongKey, KhunYoung, Nichkhun/Minho, Onew, Jay/Key, Tiffany
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Crack, College AU, Romance
Summary: DATE NIGHT! Wooyoung and Nichkhun have their first date! And everything goes swimmingly, that is of course until the entire thing goes down the crapper. Jonghyun

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[okkitten]

SPOT.

ILUSFM.

[okkitten]

Ahhhhhhh fuck it was amazing! And I just got your hilarious reply to my comment on the previous chapter but holy shit it's 6 am and I can't be coherent. I will leave another giant epic comment tomorrow if it kills me. But I had to comment again saying I love you <33333333333

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OMG ILU and your icon so hard you don't even know.

I'm so glad you liked it! TBH I was worried that this chapter was a little meh, but you enjoyed it so I guess I can unclench now.

Your comments are like a soft hug from the Baby Jesus so I am patiently awaiting your epic one.

Thanks for reading!

[okkitten]

I love that icon too. pinkijooyin has amazing icons!

Gurrrrrrrrl I loved it. Unclench please!

Each one of your fic updates is like a new 8lb 6 oz newborn infant jesus in his golden fleece diapers has come into the world. I am happy to give you these comments as a thank you.

[okkitten]

Now. *opens NotePad*

I'm baaaaaaaack.

Here we go.

*cracks knuckles*

LARGE NEON PINK DILDOS. LAAAAAAAARGE NEEEEEEON PIIIIIIINK DIIIIIILDOS. *dying laughing* ILUSFM.

"“… with your tongue?” Key grinned, waving the dildo proudly in his hand." Oh Key. Could I love you more? I think not.

"I’ve seen your wardrobe, Buck. It’s all bad." I like to imagine Buck's wardrobe is some kind of hybrid of Urkel and Kramer from Seinfield.

"“SHOPPING TRIP!” Jonghyun and Key squealed in unison, wriggling the dildos cheerily in their fists." I would pay so much money to live in this universe. You have no idea.

"“Damn, son. Y’all party hard on this floor.”" SERIOUSLY WHY DON'T I LIVE THERE? ;_;

"Key turned his attention to Nichkhun, who jerked up from his seat at the desk, dildo in hand and a condom flapping limply from his mouth. “What?” he shrieked spitting out the condom. “I thought I’d … get a head start!”" At this point I seriously began to cry laughing. You have no idea. *spazzes*

"“I’ll just sit home… on a Friday night… by my lonesome…again

I seriously had to break this up into 3 comments because of wordcount WTF

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"“Well… um…perhaps, I have been a bit hasty in my assessment,” Key giggled nervously as Jay caressed light kisses against his neck. “Judge not lest ye be … and all that jazz…” Jay raised his head from the crook of Key’s neck. “Yo, Tupac said that right?” “Just, shut up Jay,” Key groused, crushing their mouths together in a frenzied kiss. The two tumbled backwards clumsily into the bed, Key kicking off his flip-flops along the way." AHHHHHHHHHHH *flail* FINALLY. *dying* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Okay. Okay. I think I'm done. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE okay now I'm done. <3 I love these two together so fucking much. A+ BB!

"“Good,” Wooyoung nodded. “So that means I can kiss you now?” “FINE!… Wait.. wh-wha…?” Nichkhun’s confusion was suddenly quieted by Wooyoung’s lips pressed softly against his own. He recovered from the shock quickly enough to respond in kind, gliding his mouth along Wooyoung’s smile, capturing every muffled giggle and every gasp of breath." OMG

Re: I seriously had to break this up into 3 comments because of wordcount WTF

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God you're amazing