That was very good. :D Very misleading, in a good way. I was pretty sure at times you were talking about a massage, but then there were times I wasn't so sure. And Ron's reaction to Harry's question was perfect! lol
Because I was writing it and setting it up, I wasn't sure how well I was making it vague about what was actually going on. I didn't know whether people would instantly pick the twist, or if they would be left guessing until the end, or a bit of both. Glad you thought I was successful!
Wouldn't we all like to be massaged like that? I'd think it was worth it. *sigh*
I'm kind of a suspicious person, so I automatically suspect a twist when it comes to plots. IMO, that you made me doubt the twist means you did a great job. :D
The big giveaway was the rating. If Harry's fingers had actually been doing what I was trying to suggest they might be doing, it would have definitely been an R. :)
*thinks about grabbing partner for an extended petting massage session*
Yes, I was fond of it too! I couldn't describe facial expressions the whole way through because Harry was behind him. So being able to slip in that lovely, blissed out smile at the end was great. :)
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Wouldn't we all like to be massaged like that? I'd think it was worth it. *sigh*
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Me too. ::wishes::
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*thinks about grabbing partner for an extended petting massage session*
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love the happy, dopey smile.
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Yes, I was fond of it too! I couldn't describe facial expressions the whole way through because Harry was behind him. So being able to slip in that lovely, blissed out smile at the end was great. :)
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Hugs
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Good twist.
Lucky boy.
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A bit of a clichéd twist, really, but what can you do when it's the only plot bunny biting?
Plus it was cute and Ron got to do lots of groaning.
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