IN DARKNESS BY kristen999 [LFWS #1 ROUND 1]

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Title: In darkness
Author: kristen999
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: > Write a story featuring the team in which ONLY dialogue is used. No scene setters at all. Just pure dialogue. Not even ‘... Sheppard said’ or ‘... Rodney

Comments

[writerjc]

You're breaking my heart! But there is hope, his hair will save him! :) Nice tension. I'm amazed at what you can get across with just dialogue.

[kristen999]

Thank you..in mind's eyes there's another act to this story so yes, there is a ton of hope things end well.

[sherryw]

You nasty person you leaving it like that. I hope you plan on writing more if you are going to tease your readers like that. LOL!! ^-^ Great job!!!

[kristen999]

It's only a tease b/c of the limited words we were allowed :-P I consider drabbles under a thosand...so this was tough!

Thank you!!

[linzi5]

*Gulp* How can you leave it there??? You evil writer! ;) Wonderful job. I loved this! :)

[kristen999]

You know I can be pretty evil my dear :-p

Thank you.

[obsessed1o1]

Ha! I totally knew this was you!! LOL!! Because i freaking loved it! The voices were spot on. I know that you love Ronon and explore his character a lot in your stories and understand him so his actions were dead on at the end.

“I know. I...I can't...hold it up any longer.”

“Then stop playing Atlas and let go!”

“That was the plan.”

“No, wait! Rono--”

Absoloutely spot on and chilling. Wonderful! Glad you made it through! (Unlike Ronon :()

[kristen999]

Thank you my dear! And in my mind Ronon did make ..its just in an other Act :D