Fic: Wardrobe (Dex/Sheppard, NC-17)

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Title: Wardrobe
Author: dragojustine
Recipient: scrollgirl
Pairing: John/Ronon
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If they were mine, Ronon would have worn jeans more
Author's Notes: For scrollgirl in sga_santa, who liked John/Ronon, episode tags, and slice-of-life. No warnings

Comments

[gaffsie]

Aww, these guys really break me sometimes with their love for each other. I love that Ronon eventually figured out just what the jeans stood for.

"This is a normal level of sucking for me, thanks." Sheppard picked up his stick and looked at it ruefully, like maybe his fourth disarm was somehow its fault.

Hah, well done capturing the essence of Sheppard at sparring practice. ;)

[dragojustine]

*laughs* I kind of love watching John Sheppard get beat up. Thank you!

[dragojustine]

Thank you so much!

[scrollgirl]

Omigod, yay yay yay! *bounces* Oh, this was so happy-inducing! I seriously, seriously loved this, and I'm not just saying that to be polite. It's exactly the kind of fic I love: John and Ronon being sweet and sexy and playful and comfortable with each other.

I really like how you have Ronon noticing the oddities of Earth clothing, trying to get comfortable with short sleeves, having to wear boxers because of zippers.

He looked like an Earther, or close enough, though he was darker than all but a handful of Earthers he'd ever met.

Isn't that the truth. *rueful*

Sometimes, watching Sheppard suck cock, he wondered which of them was enjoying himself more. This time, with the stifled little noises Sheppard made around him and the way his hips jerked restlessly, he was pretty sure he knew.Um, yeah, that's super hot. Also, I love that Sheppard pulls off his sweatband, no big deal, and lets Ronon touch his naked wrist. Ronon imagining Sheppard in Satedan clothing was kind of heart-breaking--makes me want to snuggle him. Interestingly, as

[dragojustine]

I'm so glad you liked! And so glad the sparring scene worked. This was a lot of fun to write- your request was so good but so different from what I would do on my own.

[gottalovev]

oh wow, what a great Ronon/John fic! I love the implication of blue jeans and how they mean sort of home for John, and how Ronon is ready to use that. lovely!

[dragojustine]

Aw, thanks!

[bironic]

Oh, that is an awesome kind of cross-dressing, deepened by the complicated feelings each has about his home and the love they have for each other. It was great to see Ronon imagining John becoming a little bit Satedan, too, after we had five seasons of Ronon and Teyla adopting Earth habits and seeing next to no reciprocation.

Your Ronon voice is fantastic as well. I loved details like the odd pull and cut of short sleeves, and the fear Ronon feels at fighting in close quarters while John just doesn't get it.

Also -- very hot sex!

[dragojustine]

Thank you! You're right about Ronon adopting Earth habits- I like to think it was more reciprocated than we see on the show.