Fic: Wardrobe (Dex/Sheppard, NC-17)

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Title: Wardrobe
Author: dragojustine
Recipient: scrollgirl
Pairing: John/Ronon
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If they were mine, Ronon would have worn jeans more
Author's Notes: For scrollgirl in sga_santa, who liked John/Ronon, episode tags, and slice-of-life. No warnings

Comments

[scrollgirl]

Omigod, yay yay yay! *bounces* Oh, this was so happy-inducing! I seriously, seriously loved this, and I'm not just saying that to be polite. It's exactly the kind of fic I love: John and Ronon being sweet and sexy and playful and comfortable with each other.

I really like how you have Ronon noticing the oddities of Earth clothing, trying to get comfortable with short sleeves, having to wear boxers because of zippers.

He looked like an Earther, or close enough, though he was darker than all but a handful of Earthers he'd ever met.

Isn't that the truth. *rueful*

Sometimes, watching Sheppard suck cock, he wondered which of them was enjoying himself more. This time, with the stifled little noises Sheppard made around him and the way his hips jerked restlessly, he was pretty sure he knew.

Um, yeah, that's super hot. Also, I love that Sheppard pulls off his sweatband, no big deal, and lets Ronon touch his naked wrist. Ronon imagining Sheppard in Satedan clothing was kind of heart-breaking--makes me want to snuggle him. Interestingly, as someone who feels Sheppard still has a lot of loyalty to Earth despite Atlantis being his first priority, I really appreciate how it's about wanting a bit of home for both of them, how Earth and Sateda are valued here.

There's so much to love in this fic, I just want to keep listing it all! I love that Ronon hates grappling, because of course it means something different to him than to fighters who've only grappled with other humans. I love that he's pissed off that Sheppard's playing a game. It's great characterisation, and I'm so glad you wrote this for me :D

[dragojustine]

I'm so glad you liked! And so glad the sparring scene worked. This was a lot of fun to write- your request was so good but so different from what I would do on my own.