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Sweat by Abi

May 02, 2006 21:25

Title: Sweat
Author: Abi
Rating: Adult Content
Challenge: Sex, Drugs and Rock n Roll
Spoilers: Up to the Hive (mid season 2)
Summary: “We agreed that it would be best for all if we no longer relied upon the enzyme.”
Pairing: Teyla/Rodney/Ronon
Author's Notes: Thank you to my betas chimosa, fashes, kitkat3979, lemonbella and rosewildeirish and anyone I may have forgetten should shoot me.

( Sweat )

author: justabi, challenge: sex drugs and rock & roll

Comments 46

lillyjk May 3 2006, 04:06:16 UTC

GUH! excellent premise and pacing, I could feel the rhythm of this story as I was reading, the ever-increasing build-up. very hot!

justabi May 4 2006, 07:01:28 UTC

Thank you! I am glad that the build-up worked.

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justabi May 4 2006, 07:02:14 UTC

Hee. I like the idea of Rodney kinda almost but still not knowing that he's getting a contact high and that's why he's so desperate for it.

blaidd_drwg May 5 2006, 09:13:26 UTC

that's what I liked best about this fic. :)

Objectively it is hot, though not one of my favorites since I don't like Junkie!Ronon.

justabi May 5 2006, 10:30:31 UTC

Junkie!Ronon is kind of a bastard, isn't he? Totally using Rodney and manipulating Teyla and in general being a dick about it. And yet, I still love him. *pets feral little junkie puppy*

But I also think that Rodney, he doesn't know because he really doesn't want to know. I think at some level he's okay with Ronon using him, because he's totally a junkie, too, and it's not like he's not getting something out of it, you know? He's smart enough to get it if he actually thought about it, and he thinks about everything, so he has to be actively *not* thinking about it. Of course I like him all fucked up, too. *cuddles him*

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thelastbloom May 3 2006, 05:28:10 UTC

I feel like Teyla hit me with that last line. So, so, hot and allover good, too.

justabi May 4 2006, 07:02:42 UTC

Yay! I just love it when she punches him in the face. *happy place*

scififreak May 3 2006, 05:58:34 UTC

Oh, hot, dirty, and fucked up. Excellent. You can just feel the incoming implosion of the team in this when it all comes crashing down on them.

justabi May 4 2006, 07:03:52 UTC

Hee. Yeah, I don't imagine John will react well. *pets him* Thank you!

kimberlite May 3 2006, 06:03:55 UTC

Hot and hard and guh. :)

justabi May 4 2006, 07:04:30 UTC

*happy sigh* Exactly what I wanted. Thank you!