Comments | sga_flashfic: Hopelessly Outclassed, by Delurker (for the Harlequin Challenge)

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Hopelessly Outclassed, by Delurker (for the Harlequin Challenge)

Sep 11, 2005 01:34

Title: Hopelessly outclassed
Author: delurker
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard pre-slash
Rating: G
Feedback/criticism: Will be gratefully hoarded and possibly gold-plated.
Author's notes: The plot bunny bit hard for this one. Ouch. For kiranovember, who suggested it, although it's not quite what you asked for. Many thanks to dzurlady for the very quick and dirty beta as I slide in ( Read more... )

author: delurker, challenge: harlequin

Comments 85

elayna88 September 10 2005, 16:05:16 UTC

Cool set-up! I'm looking forward to more.

fenris_wolf0 September 10 2005, 18:08:04 UTC

Heh heh heh... Your icon is hilarious!

delurker September 11 2005, 12:55:24 UTC

Thanks! It moved into my brain and wouldn't move out.
I wasn't planning on continuing, but everyone wanting to know what happens next has sparked ideas and a desire to write them, so I very well may continue. You're all such enablers. :)

delurker September 11 2005, 12:56:09 UTC

And ditto on the icon. Hee.

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Re: hee, sacrificing hamsters... firestorm172001 September 11 2005, 06:21:51 UTC

Why the heck would anyone pose as a hooker for that? I thought that was what spermsicles are for.

Re: hee, sacrificing hamsters... delurker September 11 2005, 13:01:10 UTC

I'm glad you liked the hamsters!

Harlequins... I must admit I read quite a lot of them until I discovered fanfic, and when they're bad, they're bad. But if you're lucky it's a good bad, where you get to marvel at the crack everyone was obviously one. And some are fun.

I think it's the phrase 'big lug'. How is that a good desciption for the hero? What were they thinking?

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delurker September 11 2005, 13:03:40 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. As for seeing more... well, we'll see. :)
Hopefully I can get my plot sorted without it desolving into over the top angst, which I refuse to let it do.

delurker September 11 2005, 13:06:21 UTC

It's funny how romance writers can have some absolute shockers along with some very decent stuff too, isn't it? And sad, too. Although once it worked the other way - I read one book I hated, but I loved the sequel.
And I'm sorry I brought up a traumatic memory for you. :)

vileseagulls September 10 2005, 16:43:24 UTC

A... brilliant physics professor... is stupid enough to... has so little dignity as to...

My brain refuses to finish that sentence.

So many levels of wow.

Also, cute, I want to see the next part. :D

delurker September 11 2005, 12:49:57 UTC

Personally, I think the phrase 'big lug' is what gets me. Who thought that would be a good description for the hero?

Thanks! I'm so happy you liked it enough to want more. (Or that you're curious enough. *g*) I wouldn't hold your breath, but I have some ideas. We'll see. :)

vileseagulls September 11 2005, 13:17:37 UTC

Yes, I stalled on that as well.

RITE MOOR OMG!!! :D

delurker September 11 2005, 13:23:41 UTC

sarren September 10 2005, 17:14:28 UTC

You had me hooked at the summary :)

Also, I want you to finish the story cos you're damn good.

scap3goat September 10 2005, 19:01:35 UTC

::icon love::

sarren September 10 2005, 19:05:48 UTC

Shareable - by skater_g8r, like this one *points*

scap3goat September 10 2005, 19:48:26 UTC

ohhhh... you guys REALLY tempt me... I've never been much of a McShepper before this challenge and those icons... *dropsdead*

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