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Prompt 79.04

Sep 03, 2009 13:29

Five people Jack kisses at his retirement party (after he's had a few).

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set 79, jack o'neill, prompts

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Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 chattycatsmeow September 14 2009, 01:43:24 UTC

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Re: Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 _xanthia September 15 2009, 05:19:09 UTC

I like the definite feel to this, as if we're following Jack as he wanders around. Quite awesome visuals, really.

(And giving Davis promotions, weeee! We all love Major Davis, don't we?)

Re: Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 chattycatsmeow September 16 2009, 23:32:47 UTC

Thanks for the comment! I totally heart Major Davis.

Re: Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 sidlj September 15 2009, 20:47:43 UTC

OMG, it's the Trust that's been screwing over Paul Davis? :-D I'm certainly glad Jack's helped him make up for lost time. Cool.

Sweet little Daniel-sandwich, there. (as opposed to the porny kind of sandwich!)

The future looks bright. And maybe that pesky DADT will become part of dusty history books and then Jack and Daniel can show the world what two heroes in love with each other look like. *gets misty*

Re: Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 chattycatsmeow September 16 2009, 23:36:49 UTC

Yes! The Trust! Evil-doers extraordinaire, right down to conspiracy and connivance to block a good man at every turn! It's the only logical explanation! :D

Sometimes I just get a hankering for a sweet sandwich, though I'm getting misty with you at the last comment. ::happy sigh::

Re: Sweeter Than Wine 2/2 happydog57 September 21 2009, 03:32:12 UTC

Yay! You promoted Paul Davis! About time and good idea on why it hadn't happened before.

I like the nod to the fact that Jack's retirement doesn't solve all the DADT problems. But the way you wrote about them just quietly stealing away together and Jack looking forward to that time was so sweet.

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