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starglyph in sg1_five_things

Prompt 5.05

Oct 31, 2006 08:26

Five things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched

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set 5, daniel jackson, prompts

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tsiankiio October 31 2006, 18:12:58 UTC

1 The glowing staff on PX3-251. Really, he should of known by then that anything glowing was bad ( ... )

narissala November 13 2006, 18:41:53 UTC

Heehee. I like 5. It is so Daniel and I like that he was still inquistitive after ascending.

whimsicalwhims November 13 2006, 19:00:29 UTC

Ha! These are all very funny. And number 5-

this time it was Oma doing the scolding and not Jack, and he'd managed to turn the entire population of Earth into dogs for three minutes

-of course Daniel would get into trouble when he was ascended,too. How could he not?

sidlj November 14 2006, 02:16:22 UTC

#3 is too funny, and I love that in #4 Daniel managed to find a trap door in a temple that thousands of other people had already been through.

Oh, $5 is sweet. (And funny!)

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sidlj November 12 2006, 05:09:37 UTC

Five things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched1. He shouldn’t have touched the red fruit on P3R-721. He took one from the bowl that was being passed, and then got side-tracked by a question from the village elder. He sat and held it in his hand and talked. He didn’t even need to put it into his mouth for the allergic reaction to kick in. He nearly fainted when Janet told him just how lucky he’d been ( ... )

narissala November 13 2006, 18:42:53 UTC

I really love 1-4 a lot. I get 5, but it is so sad as versus our lovable curious archeologist.

sidlj November 13 2006, 18:53:26 UTC

Well, obviously, since we never saw any of these things happen, this whole response must be relating the experiences of a Daniel who is not (I just decided) from our universe.

We've got one of the ones that doesn't ache. *pets him happily*

mar_sin_nua November 13 2006, 20:52:54 UTC

Poor Daniel, always so curious...

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Five Things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched - 1/2 starglyph November 12 2006, 19:28:59 UTC

First- Not only did he touch it, he broke it; that damned, all-but-invisible beam of light. It flared immediately, making Daniel gasp as he was held in its glow. Jack approached cautiously, and stood in silence, listening--as Daniel bared his soul, confessing his feelings of love and want for Jack. As soon as the light dimmed, Daniel’s face took on an expression of horror as he realized the light had caused him to admit his previously unspoken feelings. With a calm he didn’t feel, Jack slowly pushed Daniel back and intently stepped into the beam. When it dimmed, Daniel had heard a similar confession from Jack. Without that first touch, they would have kept their feelings to themselves ( ... )

Five Things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched - 2/2 starglyph November 12 2006, 19:30:47 UTC

Fourth- About a month later, they enjoyed their second assignation, this time in Denver. Big city, anonymous people, they could easily blend in. Jack was careful, he knew what to do, what to watch for, and explained to Daniel how to do the same. After arriving at their hotel, and making a thorough sweep for surveillance, finally, ecstatically, they made love. Now that he could explore, Daniel touched all of Jack’s body, finding each place that made him writhe with want. Promises of devotion, shouts of pleasure and moans of satisfaction were exchanged. All of it was recorded. Thirty minutes before check out, they were still in bed--stalling as long as they could before getting up to shower and leave--when the door to their room was unlocked with a key and slammed open. They allowed Jack and Daniel to dress in front of the six suits with guns, Jack was arrested, and four armed marines escorted him out. The NID didn’t concern themselves with inconveniences like rights, when someone with Jack’s clearance crossed the line; it wasn’t just ( ... )

Re: Five Things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched - 2/2 narissala November 13 2006, 18:44:04 UTC

I like that you combined all 5 things into a single story, though I almost wish you might rewrite/expand it into a more cohesive whole. Like exactly what Jack was charged with in reference to stolen techonology and then later about why Jack was being beaten. =(

Re: Five Things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched - 2/2 starglyph November 14 2006, 04:46:10 UTC

Sorry if this wasn't clear enough. Jack was charged with 'Conduct Unbecoming'. The stolen tech refers to the 'Shades of Grey' ep, where the NID were the ones stealing technology, resulting in the rest of this (my) story. It was merely the mentioning of T's name that got Jack punished.

Re: Five Things Daniel Shouldn't Have Touched - 2/2 whimsicalwhims November 14 2006, 04:08:52 UTC

::feels incoherent::

This story made me shudder because this is really the worst case scenario for our boys. And that last line, woah- to suffer so much and to finally get their shot at happiness only to have it all destroyed... It hurts. (Excellent writing, though).

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Five things Daniel Shouldn't have Touched mr_supermoose November 13 2006, 05:41:26 UTC

Five things Daniel Shouldn't have touched ( ... )

Re: Five things Daniel Shouldn't have Touched narissala November 13 2006, 18:44:48 UTC

I absolutely love #3. Especially Yeah. Twenty swords pointed at his throat seemed to be safer than translating that for Jack.

SOOOOOO GOOOD.

Re: Five things Daniel Shouldn't have Touched mr_supermoose November 15 2006, 13:23:46 UTC

Hee! Thanks! That was the first one I wrote. I probably could pull a bigger fic out of that if I could ever write more than drabbles!

Re: Five things Daniel Shouldn't have Touched whimsicalwhims November 14 2006, 04:13:50 UTC

These are all delightful. Numbers 3 and 5 are hilarious.

Twenty swords pointed at his throat seemed to be safer than translating that for Jack.

That was a wise decision on Daniel's part.

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